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Infinite Affection


Writer, Gamer, Ticket Manager at HWCon 2018, and can't ever have enough Applejack :heart:

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When Apple Bloom discovers a strange phenomenon among the bushes outside of Canterlot High, she meets Apple Bloom, a talking pony no less, and together with their respective friends they venture out into the other world, exchanging places in an attempt to learn as much as they can about the strange new worlds without being found out as impostors.

But one such human has already begun to suspect, one who is a part of both worlds.

Coverart by GreenFlyThePegasus see his other work at Greenfly's Tumblr page

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 102 )

Best ever best ever best ever best ever BEST EVER!!!!!!!

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Yaaaaaas awesome.

This is a pretty cute chapter! :twilightsmile:

I enjoyed this chapter. Keep up the good work.

All things considered, you handled the Bloom/Apple Bloom interaction very well. :pinkiesmile: I look forward to reading this.

P.S. if you hear me shorten a name it means i'm talking about the human version

“We’ve got plenty of time to enjoy the summer; no need to hurry in case we hurt ourselves and spend the rest of it in hospital!” replied Sweetie Belle. The way I read it Sweetie Belle suddenly had a Russian accent by the end of that sentence. Lol please fix it

I'm confused. Which AB asked about the Cutie Marks the human version? she wouldn't know what that is. In the second movie she mentions the crusaders but doesn't call them the CMC cause she doesn't have or know what a cutie mark is.

When the pony version says their cutie marks must be the same the human version should ask what a cutie mark is cause she has never heard that word before.

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To be honest, the emphasis on the CMC in equestria girls is very small so in reply to your previous comment whether they're called the cutie mark crusaders or not isn't that important; I just thought it would make things easier rather than changing everything for the human world. :pinkiehappy:

In response to your recent comment, the way that the story is written suggests that they are called the cutie mark crusaders in the human world too. So when it said, "Ya mean a cutie mark is an actual thing?", that was AB questioning the meaning of their logo, since in this story ive made it out that they just made the word up. But yes, you have a point. I just didn't want to spend too long on the whole cutie mark thing since the reality of meeting yourself would be far more important.

Nice Story hope for an update and the way I see it the two who are most likely to figure out what is going on are Sunset and Princess Twilight for obvious reasons.

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I am currently working on other stories at the moment but I should be getting back to this soon. And yeah it is pretty obvious who will eventually finger them as impostors. :scootangel:

6802323 Maybe she heard something about that from Twilight or the other Girls.

This story is Awesome!!

Something tells me that this will be a six-Coffee/two-migraine problem for Sunset and Twilight to sort out when the time comes! :facehoof:

Hm... Isn't going to be a big problem if Twilight finds out that there was a hole somewhere outside Ponyville? I mean the portal wasn't supposed to be used through the Magic mirror?:rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh:

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At the moment, she has no reason to suspect that there is an external portal. I understand your point though and I have taken this into account. :ajsmug:

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If I recall it correctly, their portal's other end was at the school entrance, so I didn't know any other portal. Up to you how you will explain it.:twilightsmile:

For the love of Luna PLEASE update SOON! :twilightsmile: Or Else I may just have to give Pinkie Pie some Coffee and send her your way :pinkiehappy:

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Rest assured Twilight im working on the next chapter now... man im used to Rainbow Dash pressing me about chapters but you too, Twilight?! :rainbowlaugh:

6925081 Yay I look forward to it! :twilightsmile: And hey if Rainbow Dash is pressing you for updates, then you just KNOW your story has to be great, if she is looking forward to reading something other then Daring Do. :rainbowlaugh:

:trixieshiftleft:am I detecting a hint of shipping in Sunset's voice? Because this is the first i've ever heard of this ship if that's the case.

She glanced at the sketchbook still lying on the bench and reached her hands out to grab it. It was still open to the page she had been studying before Applejack called. She chuckled warmly as she closed it and placed it back in her satchel.

“I’d do anything for that smile.”

Yeah that's shipping:pinkiehappy:

The ponies turned Human seem to be well ahead of the Humans turned ponies on closeness to being found out

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Indeed. I thought Sunset would be more perceptive on this matter than Twilight considering she is much more practised with the human world and Equestria together. :twilightsmile:

6933753 Very true. Heh Imagine when the CMC (pony's turned human group) are presented with meat foods.

6933799 Well they knew about bacon... :applejackconfused:

6945220 hopefully that comment can disappear into the same void as the horse/human jokes from season 1.

Great story though, :twilightsmile: keep it up.

Seems good, gonna keep reading this whole thing.

"Sweetie belle" -> "Sweetie Belle"...

"mother and father" -> "Mother and Father"?

... if you post, then I’ll know you’ve seen this and I’ll make a new comment for my typos.

Here now. Just gonna keep reading. Typo spotting is hard to do.

Typo:

dumfounded to dumbfounded ...

Huh. SunApple. ... Okay.

Thread Unravelling!

Typos:

"ur"

"Celesita"

Great story, I can hardly pull meh eyes away!!

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Love this story, please continue it, I probably bet the humans are going to be found out before the ponies.

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Thanks! I'm writing the new chapter as we speak so I should get it done by the end of the week! :twilightsmile:

The scolding came as a bit of a shock to Apple Bloom. What’s a fork an’ knife?

:facehoof:

Loved the update and I look forward to the next. Keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:

I'm surprised the human girls didn't notice that they're now naked. :pinkiehappy:

I'm really enjoying this story so far. It's funny that the pony CMC are having way more problems fitting in than the human versions, but that makes sense doesn't it? Humanity has some pretty big concepts that a pony would have a hard time wrapping their head around, but in reverse not so much. Plus, the whole carnivore->vegetarian thing is very noticeable for humans, if they weren't before, and it's easier to stomach occasional vegetarian meals as an omnivore than stomaching meat when you never had it before.

If a pony goes through the portal, then changes clothes and goes back, then returns, would clothes change?

7296506 I've been wondering that myself, and that's actually what happens in the movies, Twilight leaves the human world in a dress and reenters in her normal attire.

Personally, I don't get it.

7297022 There's a strong implication that Starswirl made the mirrors. Remember, the MLP universe has some fairly blatant references to Camelot and Arthurian legend, especially surrounding Canterlot and Starswirl himself. If you assume Starswirl was Merlin, it clicks together a lot better. And part of that would be Starswirl/Merlin knowing that you can't just transit from pony-world to human-world naked or you get all sorts of the wrong kind of attention.

So the likeliest explanation is that Starswirl deliberately enchanted the mirror to make sure the transformed ponies would be clothed in whatever the local fashion at the time of transition was, so as to make sure they blend in. This little attention to detail would have come in very handy when the portal is used again a thousand years later, presumably after being donated to CHS from wherever in England it had been before that. Thus, the ponies traveling through come out dressed as locals, instead of wearing period English clothing. :)

As for why the portal-shard should have the same powers as the regular portal, I'd hazard a guess that it's simple proximity. It's so close to the actual mirror portal that the magical device is influencing its behavior. If the natural portal was farther away, that wouldn't happen.

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The other side to it is that MLP is fiction so things in fiction rarely have to make any sense! :rainbowlaugh:

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Uh oh, looks like Sunset's figuring it out. But then again, I wonder what the girls reactions are going to be from both worlds. Probably want to have fun with them first before they bust them.

It's very amusing watching this double culture shock on both sides. And I'm pretty sure the human side is busted already (though if they'll do something about it is another question), and the pony side is getting close to the same state.

:applejackconfused: Okay, I know Sunset and Applejack were a couple, but how far did they go?
Also, pony CMC will not at all question the logic of a television

Sunset 1 - Sweetie Belle 0 :twilightsmile:

Well, the pieces are falling into place.

The meteorology club is an interesting touch. I guess it could fit into canon?

Apple Bloom not knowing that animals can't talk should send up more alarms than it does, I think?

“Found it under the bed sheets, wouldn’t ya know.”

:duck:

“Lots. There’s a new weather front coming in and we think we might have predicted a nearby tornado!”

Rainbow should totally be a storm chaser! :rainbowdetermined2:

Applejack chuckled. “You’re my family too now, remember?”

She's Sunset Apple.

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