• Member Since 24th Apr, 2012
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I've always wanted a cloud... and now the day is finally here.

Third story ever? Posted to RBDash47's vaunted Vault? Wow!

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:pinkiegasp: Seriously, this is amazing. This is indubitably one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Bravo.

Church, you are so random.

. . .But also ridiculously talented. How did you make me love this story? Why are you using this gift to write fanfic? And how do I make you write more?

Keep up the great work. :ajsmug:

Wait. This might be approaching brilliant, let me check.
Yep. Pretty darn near brilliant. Well done!

Holy crap, the story passed moderation. That took a very long time. A VERY long time. I thought that I did something dreadfully wrong. Oh well!

714156 Thanks! I wrote it overnight cuz' I couldn't sleep!

714232 hmmm, yes, random. Random is good. And I will continue to write, no worries.

714638 I like brilliance! Thank you so much! :pinkiehappy:

I loved it! I want more stories from you now! :yay:

Now!? Gee, that's a tall order! Now is like... NOW! :twilightoops:

This is....
This is....
THIS IS SO COOL!! :rainbowkiss:

722919 Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Rainbow Dash! Rainbow Dash! :rainbowkiss:

To. Much. DA'WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!:heart::heart::heart::scootangel::scootangel::scootangel:
I'm SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! THANK U SO MUCH FOR POSTING!!!!!!!:heart::raritywink::twilightsmile::yay:

U get 5 yays :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay: :raritywink:

880298 Wow... um, goodness, that's the most amount of love I think I've attained for one of my fics...

Thanks so much, happy I didn't disappoint!


You didn't dissapoint! YOU COMPLETELY CAPTURED THE ESCENCE OF FLUTTERSHY!!! You are SO awesome!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::heart:

again 5 big yays: :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:


Well done on getting into the Vault! This story deserves it – 'tis interesting and memorable.

1103713 Why thank you! :pinkiehappy:

I was indeed quite surprised and happy to see that message from RBDash47. Thanks for the read!

That warm and fuzzy feeling. :twilightsmile: Fluttershy is such a dear heart. :heart:

1327814 Yes :twilightsmile:

Why I don't specifically write her I'll never know.

I read this twice, which I almost never do. I think I could have guessed you were the author if I hadn't known. You, sir, are the original crazy genius. I hope you are correspondingly eccentric.

That was amazing. I cried a little. A lot of emotions and big ideas expressed simply and beautifully. Pure Joy.

I honestly froze up when I saw your name on the blogs, Church. This is a real shocker.

Congrats, man!

One of the most underrated stories in the community, probably because of the vagueness. I think this vagueness makes it unique, special. As far as I'm concerned, this can be just as important to the community as Eternal was when it came out, even if only in a smaller way.

1523765 Wow, thank you. I wasn't expecting such a wonderful response to the fic.

1513334 If I can count to tomato then I believe I would be.

1513370 Very glad you enjoyed.

Thank god I saw this in the front page of fimfiction during one of the interview things. This story almost made me cry because it was so cute and very original. Reminds me when I was younger and I was very curious :')

1528764 Thank you for the kind words :twilightsmile:

Church, Y U so talented?

1555493 Oh, boy, I WISH I was talented...

It gives me great pleasure to inform you that The Dreamers have added your story to the folder Dreams of Hope.

Keep dreaming.

1648973 Ah, yes, the great "tense change" that I've never seemed to be able to fully grasp...

Thanks for the kind words, and thank you for pointing that out!

- Church


This... story... is perfect! Insta-fave and like! :yay:

1676458 Ah. Far from perfect, but nonetheless I strive to achieve the impossible.

Thanks for reading :twilightsmile:

This was a very nice read, thank you :twilightsmile: I especially love how you wrote your character's point-of-view, and the whole 'shy' bit was very cute and awesome. Nice work!

1726485 Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

.... And YOU thought I was a better writer :ajsmug: I really liked this. It WAS very unique. and I enjoyed it, thank you.

1978835 Thanks for the kind words :twilightsmile:

Content. Is this what it feels like?

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