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This story is a sequel to Rainbooms and Royalty


Set in Dashverse, taking place just after "Hot Heads, Cold Hearts and Nerves of Steel."

It's Hearth's Warming and time for the annual pageant depicting the founding of Equestria. The Mane Six are asked to play the roles of the three leaders and their aides. However, Fluttershy has an unusual request to make of Rainbow Dash, one that ends up more than just the play turning on its head.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 37 )

Talk about being on a roll, you're just pumping out stories :raritywink:

Putting Your Hoof Down equivalent? Now I'm excited to see where this goes.

So we have a story with Aj, one with rarity, and one with Flutters...i guess his leaves Pinkie and Twilight.

What the angling fuck is dashverse

6789840 The dashverse a series of alternate universe fanfics Trinary wrote where Rainbow Dash was Princess Celestia's student instead of Twilight.

Here's the otherstories currently in the series in chronological order.

Rainbooms and Royalty
May the Best Friends Win
Hot Heads, Cold Hearts and Nerves of Steel
Rainbow Triumphant
Wedding Bells Bug Hunt
Storm on the Prairie
Diamond and the Rough

You have a solid story here. No major grammar and spelling issues, everyone is about as in character as they can be, in a verse I like. My only problem is the update rate (about 2.25 months to get another chapter out). here is hoping you have more time and inspiration to get the chapters out.

Another good story. Really excited about this one.:pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::moustache:

Now flustered, Rarity hmphed. “It’s the height of cultural events for this time of the year!” When Pinkie Pie gave her a look, Rarity sighed. “Yes, Pinkie, with candy canes.”

:rainbowlaugh:

Maybe that’ll teach you not to have a temper tantrum.” Fluttershy trotted past the stunned bunny as his carrot fell out of his mouth in shock.

Go 'Shy! Show that miserable bunny who's boss!

Nice! I'm loving Fluttershy getting too into the role. This is gonna be a fun one to keep up with.

So far so good. Let's hope that Fluttershy does better with the Rainbow Dash Commander Hurricane attitude adjustment than she did with Iron Will's.

I was expecting the polar opposite outcome of this plotline- for everypony to struggle in their uncomfortable roles.

What appears to be happening is that they're going to get too into it, and maybe do a bit too well. Well- maybe Fluttershy will. I am sensing a smidge of Iron Will Syndrome here- I hope it doesn't get out of hand.

Then again, if there were no problem, there'd be no story, right? Looking forward to the next. :twilightsmile:

Oh I'm going to ~Love~ this. This is WAAAAY better than having Iron will to YELL SOME ASSERTIVENESS INTO HER!!! :flutterrage:

I still love you Iron Will~ :heart:

That last bit though,

“I made you a salad and you decided to throw it on the ground. So now you can have a carrot to hold you over until dinner. Maybe that’ll teach you not to have a temper tantrum.” Fluttershy trotted past the stunned bunny as his carrot fell out of his mouth in shock.

I LOVED it. This is the kind of assertiveness and tough love that Fluttershy needs to have!

I always thought Applejack and Pinkie would've done better in the other's role, but switching up everybody is going to make this story flat out hilarious. Fluttershy most of all, of course, especially if she keeps her persona up off-stage more and more (as seems to be the case). Can't wait to read more.

Rainbow just gave Shy a mental break by over exaggerated actions of scared behavior pushing her to embrace Hurricane as a security blanket. Oh boy.

Rainbow was left blinking in confused silence as her friends continued to obliviously bicker around her.

...Nopony else found that odd?

One cup of Method Acting, a pinch of I'm Right, mix slowly into the Bickering Batter and wallah your dish is ready to bake. :rainbowlaugh:

6891925 Nope, I found it odd too.

And Fluttershy's "method acting" may be going a bit overboard ...
(It was still great to see her stand up to Angle Bunny, last chapter)

As someone who spent many years working on plays I can honestly say that the play will be a disaster. If your actors don't get along and cooperate, you're headed for doom. Good luck, Dashie. :derpytongue2:

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It was because the others didn't hear Fluttershy. They were busy arguing themselves.

Oh, dear. This is going to end badly. Very badly. If not, it'll have been nothing short of a Hearths-Warming miracle.

...and I get that it's kind of the point of the chapter, but it was really cringe-worthy, and it was hard for me to willingly read it.
Par for the Dashverse course it is! :rainbowwild:

“A re-enactment where we’re coming up with our own dialogue because nopony knows what was actually said.” Rarity pointed out wryly. “Some liberties are inherent in the nature of the work.”

I think Rarity got the best of Twilight in that argument. I also think Applejack seems to be doing a better Puddinghead than Pinkie is doing with Smart Cookie.

However, everyone, except Rainbow apparently, has gone a step or two too far.

It's rough when even your friends see you as a one-dimensional stereotype!

Rainbow Dash seems to be the only one capturing the essence of her opposite number without exaggerating her traits. I guess that's because she has a lot of faith in Fluttershy.

6789604 a Putting Your Hoof Down equivalent that isn't immediately over-the-top rage monster?? Thank God. :ajbemused:

Good to see the gang making back up :twilightsmile:

Nice to see them bonding closer as friends again! :pinkiesmile:

That was an awesome speech! :twilightsmile:

Really enjoyed this story.

Okay, those were great speeches. The AU aspect of this universe has come a long way from the original.

What can I say that hasn't been said already?

We get to see some Shy Rainbow and Assertive Flutters together. *SQUEE* :yay::heart::rainbowkiss:

Angel impatiently tapped his paw against the floor, waiting for his new salad. Fluttershy looked at him, frowning. “I made you a salad and you decided to throw it on the ground. So now you can have a carrot to hold you over until dinner. Maybe that’ll teach you not to have a temper tantrum.” Fluttershy trotted past the stunned bunny as his carrot fell out of his mouth in shock.

Good. Now let's hope Fluttershy doesn't go insane.

Oh, not good when everyone is going too deeply into their roles like this.

Now that was a great ending. Good on you, Dash!

So far, it's a really great story :ajsmug: Your descriptions have a lot of details and clever references to the show, the characters are all in character (or swapped character) ... I can't really complain about anything, is's hilarious and spot-on :twilightsmile:

“Me a princess?” Twilight snorted.

Love this line.

Nice moral and great ending :twilightsmile: Though what is it with the strange spacing between the paragraphs in the second half or so?

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but twilight had a couple of good points as well props take the items rarity worked on. the cloak is fine bcause it's minor simply just we-work some stitches (especially if it looks like your skin tone) but as long as it's minor most people including historians and the director won't care. however the crown, everyone would throw away becuase it one: does not fit the time period. and two: would cause issue with the play being too reflective and possibly blinding everyone.

so in essence they are both right.

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