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AppleJTZ


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Twilight Sparkle, princess of friendship, held a speech at the Canterlot school for gifted unicorns about the Sonic Rainboom that made her and her friends discover their cutie marks. Inspired by the concept of simultaneously aquired cutie marks two students decide to further research this phenomenom. In an attempt to simulate the Sonic Rainboom of the princess one of them decides to perform a rather spectacular experiment...

Inspired by the Equestria Daily Writing Training grounds for "The Cutie Re-Mark", in which one of the available prompts was to write about some of the students from Twilight's class researching the concept of simultaneous cutie marks. I got this idea long after the deadline, but found it was cute and funny enough to still write this silly little story.

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Putting this on Read Later, so I can read it when I get back from doin' some work at my dad's car lott.

Oh, and I'm guessing still gonna have to wait on that one draft, eh?(wouldn't surprise me, knowing my luck. XD But, can't stop the curiosity from striking when the situation calls upon it. XD)

And now read. XD Hilarious way to cause another boom result. XD

A really good story that shows, for better or worse, Twilight and her friends are role models of Equestrian society and thus can inspire countless colts and fillies to hilarious acts.

Their is just one thing that bothers me. It's supposed to be 'cannon', not 'canon'. I'm not much of a grammar freak, heaven knows I've screwed up A LOT, but this really bugged me for some reason.

6786539 Corrected it. Guess I've read too many "This is canon"-jokes :twilightsheepish:

6785805 Stay patient :pinkiesmile:

6788539 lol Admittedly hard to stay patient, considering some... rough moments as of late.

6788539
Well, not better way to arm a cannon than with canon.:raritywink:

I feel like maybe Ember took a passing comment from Twilight too far with unintended and hilarious results. I can't imagine how much trouble they are both going to be in when they are discovered to be the culprits, even if it was all in the name of science.

6878275 Not much to tell, I'm afraid.

Amber picked up Ember.

They went home.

Had some dinner.

And then they were banished to the moon :derpytongue2:

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Each of those sentences could easily be expanded into a full chapter.

6882162 Well, I think I would at least try to combine the first three sentences in a single chapter, or else it would feel a bit stretched :raritywink:

Maybe I'll actuall pick up on the story one day. No promises though.

Ballistic Unicorns are Go! :trixieshiftright: <But stop trying to steal my act, okay?."

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