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Fluttercheer


Pony Author, Writer of Foal Stories, Storyteller, Equestrian Analyzer and occasional Pony Artist. You can support the stories I tell on Patreon to get nice rewards or tip me on Ko-fi (LINKS BELOW).

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On a quiet and ordinary night, Twilight sits in her library and reads a book. She is staying up late to study, like she did in so many nights before.
And suddenly, the night isn't ordinary anymore. Strange things start to happen, but what do they mean?
Is it really just exhaustion from too much reading that is causing all of this or something else entirely?

A short story dealing with the topic of premonitions and dark omens.



The cover picture was drawn by Celebi-Yoshi on Deviantart.

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Comments ( 9 )

Now, this is the most beautiful thing I ever read.
Nicely writen.

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Wow..... After almost five years, this story gets a comment. This is so unexpected that I don't know what to say at the moment. And you even call it "the most beautiful thing". That is the last thing I expected anyone would ever say about this story, that many seem to dislike because they don't believe that premonitions exist. You surprised me a lot.

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You're welcome
I actually don't understand why people complain about things instead of appreciating it. Like read it and credit the author for writing it. Honestly, I don't even care what a story is I just read it well explaining the bookworm I am I just read something and enjoy it. Though when I say "this is beautiful" I mean it.

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I see it the same way, I read every story regardless of genre or theme, and I have the suspicious feeling this is rare today. Thankfully, I didn't receive any complaints about the story, I could just tell by the upvote/downvote ratio that many people who read it found the theme of the story ridiculous.
Thank you for favouriting!

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You're very, VERY welcome :twilightsmile:

Very ominous, I wonder what happens to Twilight.

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You wonder about it? It's actually spelled out very clearly in the story and in the description, Twilight has a premonition of the destruction of her library.

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Well obviously it wasn't if I didn't figure it out...

Good story, although I don't get it. What is this mysterious creature saying goodbye? And what does it have to do with the book.

Continuing to follow the flame's movements, Twilight felt her mind slowly drifting away. Her eyes followed the flickering automatically now. She suddenly felt like she was in trance. And after some minutes – her mind seemed to have coalesced with the flame now – a single tear ran down from her left eye. For a moment, the flame was flickering more violently, like a strong breeze was waving through the library. "I'm going to miss this place once it's gone....." she found herself muttering suddenly. A sob escaped her throat the moment after. And all of a sudden, the mare was out of her trance state. What did she just say? She shook her head and leaned back again.

Is it time travel or something?

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