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Moondancer was not having a good day.

First, she'd broken her glasses. Again.

Then, Twilight Sparkle hadn't shown up to her party.

And then a crazy hallucinatory identical twin had started harassing her.

NO, Moondancer was not having a good day. At all.



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Chapters (3)
Comments ( 19 )

I personally think Moon Dancer didn't start wearing glasses (instead of contacts) and wearing the sweeter and change her mane until AFTER she felt alienated from Twilight.

I like the reference to the Hitchhikers' Guide to the Galaxy.

6838996 Actually, both flashbacks in the show have her wearing glasses.

6841228 Ah, I see. I was only half-right. And the second flashback could be ignored, as Twilight wasn't there. However, Spike's present is conclusive evidence:

I am deeply intrigued. Definitely looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

6872842 Probably not. She's behaving like she isn't usually a pony. (Also like she has future knowledge, but that doesn't count toward or against your question.)

I hope this story doesn't burn too slowly.
Also, I caught a couple spelling errors at the beginning. "She claimed it would compliment my" should say "complement," and "a school where they teach these things to mental proections?" should say "projections."

Well, this is intriguing. I think I have a few ideas about Glowrock Rythymlord's identity, but it's far too early to be sure. That comment at the end is especially interesting, given how many ways "the youngest princess" could be interpreted. Strictly speaking, one has an reign measured in negative time at the moment. The mystery deepens, and I am loving it.

Well, I really want to see where this takes us, so please update it?

Also, Glowrock Rythymlord seems pretty cool.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
2:32_4/17/2016

Yay! Funny thing: I actually bemoaned the long-time-lack of updates of certain stories in my folders. This one among them. Ha!

Well, I'm happy to see this here. Maybe we can get the next one less than 521 days later?:duck::raritywink:

Oh! Happy to see this one return, and a with a great chapter as well. I'm really enjoying the interaction between the two of them.

Please please please let this be the start of this story getting back on track. I love the premise and have missed it all this time. Thank you for updating again. :)

Very good to see more of this. Especially interesting is the question of where Starspinner got those songs, though that's incidental to the main focus. I do hope Moondancer takes the job. I think it'll be good for both her and Luna.

I tracked this so long ago I forgot what it was. Reread it. Worth tracking.

So, until the next update, then?

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