The Tale Of Shadow

by Enigmatic Brony

Chapter 6: A local Save

Chapter 6: A local save

I zoom of too Pony La Graze to see if I could make a booking for tomorrow night. As I arrive at the restaurant I notice that a young maire was being picked on by two colts
“Hey you going to run home crying to mummy” Said one of the male ponies
“Yeah you going to cry you cry baby” said the other one
“Hey you to leave that girl alone” I said walking over to the bullies
“Hey granddads why don’t you go back and sit on your rocking chair” said one of the male Ponies
“How about you beat it and leave this poor girl alone”
“How about we stay and beat you instead” said the other pony
“You’re free to try” I said with a smirk on my face
The two Male Ponies begin to walk circles around me trying to find a weak spot where I won’t see them coming. Then the both begin to charge me from either side.
“Hmm stupid fools” I said quietly as I step back making them crash into each other.
They both decide that charging wasn’t going to work for them again so they ran to the side of the restaurant where a stack of barrels were all stacked up and start launching them at me.
I start to dodge each barrel as it is being thrown at me.
“Ok guys, is that all you can do…seriously” I said “how about you leave now before you both hurt yourselves”
But the continue to throw barrels at me so I kick one back at them knocking over one of the ponies
“Now are you going to leave?”
“Never” shouts the standing pony
He begins to charge at me but stops and swings a left punch at me
“Ok… Funs over”
I dodge underneath his arm and grab his right leg and throw him into the fountain behind me
“Ok…. I think it’s time for you both to leave before I have to humiliate you some more”
The next thing you knew they were both running home like some cry baby’s
“Are you ok” I said to the filly on the ground that the bullies were teasing
The light blue filly with white hair looks back up to me
“Yeah I’ll be ok” she said trying not to cry
“Are you sure” I said seeing her struggling to get up off the ground
“Yeah I’ll be fine…. I’m kind of used to it know so it doesn’t bother me anymore”
“Hey no pony in PonyVille should ever have to be bullied it’s just not right” I said helping her off the ground “What’s your name by the way?”
“My name is Sparkle and what’s yours?”
“I’m Shadow… Nice to meet you”
“You to”
“Well can I at least help you home? So those bullies don’t come back”
“Actually I was going to see my dad he owns that restaurant over there called Pony La Graze”
“Well I’ll help you over there because that’s where I’m heading”
“Ok”
Sparkle and I walk over to her father’s restaurant Pony La Graze.
“Hey dad are you here?” Shouts Sparkle
“Yes I’m here honey” Said her father from I the kitchen
“Hey dad I’ve got someone I would like you to meet… He saved me from those bullies at school”
“So someone finally stopped `those dreadful bullies I’ve been trying for weeks but they always come back” said Sparkles father while walking out from the kitchen
“Hey Sparkle darling why don’t you go upstairs and find your mother”
“Ok daddy”
“How about me and you go for a walk Mr….”
“Shadow” I said butting in
“Mr Shadow”
We begin to walk outside the restaurant.
“Shadow I owe you for looking after my darling Sparkle”
“What about a free romantic dinner tomorrow night at six o’clock”
“Hmm you got a deal my friend…. but what the hell sure… Tomorrow six o’clock we will be ready my friend”
“Thank you sir… See ya tomorrow night”
“By the way Shadow the names Al”
“Yeah I understand… See ya tomorrow night
“Bye Shadow”
By the time I get home the clock said its 9:00 PM, so I decide to head upstairs and go to sleep

Comments

[Old Diggy]

Might want to work on the dialogue bits, kind of hard to follow, also it seems like your making him, I believe it's called, a Gary-Stu.