Countless millennia ago, the Alicorns sisters sealed away a creature of endless hunger and darkness. Deep below Canterlot it awaits the day when another being enters its prison, to at last be free...
Twilight is the protege of Princess Celestia and Princess Luna, she is a friend to all, a great one at that, but when her friends and family forsake her at the wedding between her brother and former foal sitter. Twilight is entrapped beneath Canterlot by Princess 'Cadence', and seeks a way out to stop whatever plans the Alicorn has for her homeland.
But before she can find a means to escape, Twilight comes across an ancient crystal prison deep in the mines. That's when IT appeared finding her sobbing at the foot of its prison...
Notice - I have changed Voidras to just Void and Twilight to her official (Twilight Sparkle) name.
Indefinite hiatus
Equinox sense's Tingling
*sighs* Twilight, everyone knows to never tell the eldritch being their name.
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Well depends on what one you are dealing with some would just rip it out of your mind.
You have my attention.
You have my interest. I'm curious to see where you take this.
Interesting
ayy lmao
I still don't understand why people give Twilight Abigail as a middle name, but that's my only real complaint. I'm interested to see where this takes us.
6917804 I don't quite know myself. It came to me on a whim while I was writing the first chapter.
Anymore?
6965080 Yep, just taking a break for new ideas.
6971087 Cool ^^
Interesting, nice intro.
Very interesting, so Twilight isn't a midless slave,
wonder how you will develop this, good work.
6971846 I'm continuing now, you can expect Celestia being a badass next chapter.
7123792 cool ^^
Overpowered OC villain winning without effort. My interest in the story has expired.
7124597 Ah don't be so quick to judge. I said Celestia was seemingly killed.
7124597 gotta read them authors notes bruh
cool
luna has a daughter??? who is the sire?? and are luna and twilight dateing??
I for one cant wait to find out the answer lol, good story
Now i wait
So, twilight kisses cadance. I want a picture of that. Internet, picture please.
mmmm now i wonder when all is said and done, day and world save who will cadance choose.
7420563 Only for you...t15.deviantart.net/efT-4of3bIMAJiNxj6eNnZG8q38=/300x200/filters:fixed_height(100,100):origin()/pre15/b4e7/th/pre/f/2013/040/6/e/a_love_reward_for_princess_cadence_by_v_d_k-d5udjyk.png
7420929 Thank you
7420941 You're welcome, Orie!
7420563 Liking the story so far I take it?
7421047 Yep.
Cadance needs to step up and impart some sense (kinetically or otherwise) into her sister-in-law...
Ok.
You've got me interested.
Keep it up.
Oh, and add your story in some groups.
It works as additional tags + it will be easier to find.
ok i do not know how i never found this story before but i really like it pleas continue working on it. ^_^
7597177 I'm working on the next chapter as we speak, just evening it out basically.
7596863 Right. I was just figuring out what types of groups it would fit in,
7598665 thank you for telling me. i hope i did not make you feel like you had to rush. but i really like this story and if i cared alittle less i would demand you hurry up :P but it would kill me to do that to any one. with that said do not stress over what we your fans say. ^_^
I just realized this was updated
More! I want to read more! Where is the next chapter so I can read more?!
I'm still not entirely sure of how Voidras looks.
7601266 Basically the point. Voidras has a black dragon head with five horn-like protrusions at the back of its head. Three red eyes with star shaped pupils, one on each side and the third one in the center of its forehead. Most of its body if just black-grey formless energy, it has two clawed dragon arms made of translucent grey crystal. That help?
7602389 Yep. Thanks. Until now, I was just picturing Andros from Star Fox.
I don't know if Twilight is supposed to come off as sympathetic here, but if she is, it's really failing massively.
7621013 Sympathetic? Nope. Lacking empathy on the other hand.
7621013 anyway this story is a work in progress, hence the wait time
Ow many just when it was getting very interesting to read keep up a good work update more soon. Shining leave twilight and cadence alone before you piss twilight off great story
7625800 To be honest I'm not entirely sure if I'll be continuing this story. It's not really going anywhere in my opinion lately.
7602389 You should add that description to the actual story. Why is this story on hiatus?
7688924 I wasn't sure if I would continue it, but I had a change of heart.
good chapter but i kind of lost i got to reread it alll
Every thing still ok with the story?