A Day at the Market
Starlight Glimmer looked upon the throng of ponies that made up Ponyville’s market today, each individual engaged in their own schedule. That was good, because she had one of her own to follow as she trotted into the market square, eyeing each stall down. Her brow furrowed when she spotted the asparagus stand. She beelined towards it and waved, the attendant returning a dark glare that sent a chill through Starlight as she approached him.
Starlight cleared her throat, then smiled. “Hello, I’d like a bundle of asparagus.”
“Twenty bits,” the clerk said while rummaging through his wares.
“E-excuse me?” Starlight asked, “I don’t think I heard you right. It sounded like you said―”
“Twenty bits, take it or leave it.”
She clenched her jaw as she grasped twenty bits in her magic and offered it to the pony. “Here you go. Twenty bits.”
“Much obliged,” he said as he angled a bag which Starlight dropped the payment into. He rifled through his stock and slapped a bundle of asparagus on the counter. Biting her cheek to keep herself under control, she left without a word.
Okay, that was weird. Maybe he’s just… the unfriendly type. Starlight located her next destination. Maybe the cherry salespony will be more amicable. She put on one of her award-winning smiles and walked up to the stand.
Starlight nodded. “Hello, there―”
“Fifty bits.”
Starlight inhaled sharply, then narrowed her gaze. “You’re joking.”
“I’m assuming you want a cherry, don’t you?” he said before he sniffed.
“You can’t honestly expect me to pay that much for a single cherry.” She felt her veins fill with fire.
The cherry clerk brought his face close to hers. “Look, lady, I’m guessing you came to my stall because you wanted a cherry. You can either take the cherry I’m offering you for fifty bits or leave cherryless.” He leaned back. “Up to you.”
A vein in Starlight’s neck throbbed as she pulled out fifty bits and shoveled it onto the stall.
Remember, Twilight told me to mingle with the townsfolk. It’s not my fault if everyone woke up on the wrong side of the bed this morning.
“Now that wasn’t so hard, was it?” the salesman asked as he fished out a cherry and lobbed it to Starlight. She caught it in her glow, placed it in her saddlebag, and curty walked off.
It was the same at each stall she went to; each clerk charging exorbitant prices for simple goods. By the end of it, she was only able to purchase a single meal’s worth of food with the entire weekly allowance Twilight had given her. Her jaw was also sore and her vision felt like lava. She swore she’d clock the next pony who even looked at her funny.
A hoof touched her shoulder. “Hey, there―”
Starlight swiveled around and raised a hoof. “I don’t have any more money!” she yelled only to lay her eyes on Applejack, who motioned to block. Starlight let her hoof fall to the ground and took a deep breath. “Sorry, Applejack. I’ve had a bit of a rough day.” She forced a weak chuckle. “Apparently the townsfolk think I’m made of bits.”
“About that.” Applejack sighed. “I’ve been trying to find you so that we could go shopping together.” She grinned. “Y’know, so ponies wouldn’t take advantage of you.”
“Why would ponies take advantage of me?” Starlight asked pointedly as she raised an eyebrow.
Applejack pursed her lips. “Well, it seems that a pony might’ve overheard Pinkie and Dashie talking about some of the things you might have caused, and word gets around fast in a small town like this.”
Starlight glared at Applejack. “Those never happened.”
“Shucks.” Applejack shrugged. “I know that, and you know that, but I’m pretty sure most of Ponyville ain’t going to be thinking no two ways about causality when they hear things like ‘eternal night’ and ‘lifeless wasteland’.”
Starlight screwed up her face and put a hoof to her chest as her breath caught in her throat.
My one chance, destroyed by gossip and hearsay. She’s going to be so disappointed in me.
Applejack slapped Starlight’s back. “Don’t be so down. The best thing you can do is what you’re doing right now.” She leaned into Starlight. “Now what do you say we ask some ponies for your bits back?”
Starlight nodded tentatively. “I like the sound of that.”
“Course ya do.” Applejack chuckled. “Now, who first?”
Applejack watched as Starlight pointed at the asparagus pony. “Well, he charged me twenty bits for a bundle.”
“Did he, now?” Applejack cocked her hat and waltzed up to him, Starlight in tow. He was busy with another customer.
“Thank you, have a nice day,” he said before he laid eyes on Applejack and smiled. “Applejack! What brings you here?”
Applejack leaned in. “Hello there. Now I have been led to understand that you may have overcharged my friend here”―she pointed at Starlight―”a teensy bit more than the usual.” She flashed a grin. “Now, if’n you would be so kind as to give her the difference back, we won’t be having any problems.”
The clerk glared at Applejack. “She caused Eternal Night.”
“Uh huh.” Applejack chortled. “That’s funny, because I could’ve used a little night time when it was hotter than a chili pepper on a stove a few hours ago.” She winked at him.
He reached into his bag and pulled out the bits he had overcharged Starlight, her grasping them in her glow and putting them back in her saddlebag while sticking her tongue out at the salespony.
“She could stand to learn some manners, if you ask me.”
Applejack nodded. “One step at a time. First she needs some friends to use those manners on, then we’ll get to that. Now you have a nice day, y’hear?”
He grumbled back in recognition as Applejack and Starlight walked away.
“Now, who else?” Applejack asked.
“That pony made my pay fifty bits for a cherry.” Starlight pointed at the cherry stand.
Applejack glared at Starlight. “...Why did you pay that much?”
Starlight shrugged. “I didn’t want to make waves or hurt potential friendships.”
“Well then.” Applejack growled. “I’m gonna have to give a stern talking-to to Cherry Cobbler.”
Cherry Cobbler finished up a sale. “Thank you, have a nice day!” He noticed Applejack stomping up to his stall. “Ah, the wonderful Applejack! What can I do ya for?”
Applejack grabbed him by the bowtie and pulled him in close. “I am under the impression that you have grievously overcharged one of my friends for the pleasure of owning one of your fine cherries.”
“My cherries are indeed the finest in Ponyville,” Cherry Cobbler confirmed as he glared at Applejack. “But I didn’t overcharge one of your friends.”
“Yes you did!” Starlight shouted. “You overcharged me!”
Cherry Cobbler looked at Starlight, then at Applejack. “She one of yours?”
Applejack nodded and snarled.
He barked a laugh. “She ain’t nopony’s friend. She caused changelings to take over Equestria.”
“Alright, then.” Applejack let go of Cherry Cobbler. “That’s not how I remember it. How I recall it happening is that Princess Cadance and Shining Armor repelled the changelings.” Applejack looked around the market. “There ain’t a changeling for miles around now.”
A changeling walked up to Cherry Cobbler. “Could I have a cherry?”
“Sure thing, Kevin! That’ll be one bit.”
Kevin gave Mr. Cobbler a bit and he grabbed his cherry. “Thank you, Mr. Cobbler,” he said before scurrying away.
Cherry chuckled. “Great kid, that one.”
Applejack leveled a glare at Cherry Cobbler. “I think you know what I’m going to say next.”
“What? He’s a nice boy.” He rifled through his wares. “Certainly didn’t kill everyone in Equestria.”
“Gee whiz.” Applejack snorted. “I sure as sugar know that didn’t happen, seeing as how you and I are having this conversation. Now give her her money back.”
Cherry put his hooves to his face and took a deep breath. “Fine. But if she fouls up, it’s on your head.” He pulled out the bits he owed Starlight. She put them in her saddlebag and winked at him.
Applejack sighed. “Who’s next?”
Starlight looked around. “Well…”
“Alright, let’s make this easier.” Applejack trotted to the center of the market and cleared her throat.
“Anyone who overcharged my friend Starlight Glimmer here, give me the bits you fleeced her or I’ll let Big Mac know what you think about fair and honest business!”
One by one, salesponies filed up and gave Applejack bits: some two, some twenty. When all was said and done, everyone except Golden Harvest had repaid Starlight Glimmer.
Applejack smiled at Golden. “Well, it’s nice to see you didn’t gyp her.”
“I didn’t overcharge her because I refused sale.”
Starlight snarled. “Oh yeah. You’re the mare who refused to sell me carrots!”
“I didn’t sell you my wares because you need to know stealing cutie marks isn’t okay.”
Starlight sneered at Golden Harvest. “I only stole six cutie marks and they’ve forgiven me.” Starlight looked around the crowd. “Yet I’ve never harmed any of you and you treat me like an outcast!” Starlight seethed for a few moments, then took a deep breath. “Fellow Ponyvillians, I understand that through pettiness I attempted to exact vengeance. Princess Twilight has decided to give me a new lease on life when I myself would have punished anyone else were I given the chance―or worse.” She walked around as she addressed the crowd. “I expected to be given a chance at friendship because that’s what Twilight promised me. And yet.” Starlight raised a hoof. “That experience lets me now understand why you all cheated me. Because it feels good to exact some manner of vengeance, no matter how petty it is. I’d even go so far to say that all vengeance is pettiness, no matter how one feels about it.
“And that makes us the same in a way I’d not prefer to be like all of you.” Starlight eyes wettened. “I would prefer to have a common bond over the good times I foresaw sharing with all of you, as opposed to being treated like I deserved.” Starlight sighed. “I just want to make friends. Is that so hard to understand?”
Golden Harvest walked up to Starlight and offered her a bundle of carrots. “No, it isn’t.” She chuckeld as Starlight put the carrots in her saddlebags. “Just know that we’ll be keeping an extra-sharp eye on you.”
“Thank you.” A single tear escaped from Starlight’s eye. “From the bottom of my heart.”
Applejack groaned. “Now was that so hard? C'mon, Starlight, let's get back to the castle before I do somethin' I might regret.”
With that, Starlight and Applejack took the trek to Twilight’s Castle.
Applejack looked at Starlight. “How long have you been preparing that speech?”
Starlight wiped the tear from her face. “Ever since Twilight and I came back from the time-travel shenanigans.”
“Eeyup.”
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Dammit,
SyeekohKevin!I'd have gone with "moistened" myself, but eh.
Glad you put something out. Been a while.
6770099 I'm glad to have put something out.
And the moment just spoke to me.
Okay. Seriously. Has nobody ever heard of an alternate universe? As in, the one they're not in?
Other than that, well done.
6770143 I imagine it must be somewhat of an alien concept for those not drowning in media that explores the concept.
And thank you.
6770156
My pleasure, mate!
I feel like this would've benefitted a lot if you'd have extended this a little bit. Right now, it just feels like Starlight had a problem, AJ comes along and fixes it, and then heartfelt speech and fade to black. Nothing at all wrong with the concept, I like that quite a bit.
... considering the number of vengeance fics that I've seen as well as those fics that went along some expected lines, to see something so gash durned normal earns this piece a like from me.
6770197 I suppose I could have. I'll have to remember that in the future. I'm glad you liked the concept, though!
6770199 This is the first time I've been praised for normality. Thank you.
6770199
Sometimes a writer as abnormal as Syeekoh must put out something more normal every now and then to maintain his abnormality.
What did she chuck? Or did she "chuckle"?
With all the winking Applejack was doing, I am starting to think it was her idea to overcharge Starlight. To be completely fair to her, it was only twice, but they were at odd intervals of time.
Manhandling (Stallionhandling?) ponies, blackmailing them, threatening them, masterminding the extortion of Starlight? This Applejack reminded me of the Applejack from Ultra Fast Pony. So much so that I started reading her lines with an Irish brogue. However, I am not complaining, I am happy. We need more Ultra Fast Pony based stories on this site.
~KBO.
6770229
UFP is seriously underrated.
6770249 So very much so.
6770223 Np, dude. Really, just a little fleshing out for the conflict and it'd really pop, I think. The concept alone is quite believable, though, and something I could see coming into play in the actual show if they decide to go that route.
I suppose that depends if Pinkie and Rainbow keep their mouths shut >.>
What do you think of Spike and Starlight as a couple?
6770318 Show accurate... that's not something I thought I'd ever hear about one of my fics. o_O
But yeah, I guess I could look it over in the next few days and see where to flesh it out.
6770328 Don't let your dreams be dreams.
6770366 Believe me, I'm hiding in my bunker. This is truly a sign of the endtimes.
Syeekoh pls
6770393
I enjoyed reading this fic since it addresses one of the obstacles that Starlight may face when she tries to get used to living in Ponyville, which involves interacting with ponies other than the mane six.
Nice job, definitely feels like it could be a scene from upcoming Season 6, as I assume at least one episode of that season will deal with Starlight Glimmer learning how to be a good friend.
>35 likes
>no dislikes
6770566
YOU FOOL
6770564 I seem to be getting that a lot, so I must have done something right.
Thanks.
6770570
What?
6770276 Actually, Wacarb is in the middle of season four.
6770579
Pointing out a story's perfect rating is a surefire way to attract troll downvotes.
6770579 It's another thing the TF2 lady says. Also potentially a reference to you jinxing the "no dislikes" streak.
Wow, this was a really good story! As others have said, it seems just like something we'll hope to see in the next season!
It looks like Starlight is the new Fluttershy.
Seems that she could do with a few lessons with the dude in my avatar.
P.S Kevin needs his own fan club. Get on it.
6770762
Fine. Please accept my apology in the form of an image:
i.imgur.com/krvSMiM.png
6770771 Thank you. That seems to be a rather popular sentiment.
*Insert joke about Starlight and a big bag of crabs*
Okay, the fic was great in its own right, but then you had to throw Kevin in there?
ALL OF MY LIKE!
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People usually try to say that the people of city is kinda cold and jerk while the countryside has warm heart or so. The truth is countryside is far more stubborn, more jerk, and more sneaky when they tr6 to take advantage of sb or sth.
Srsly, what is so good reason that overcharge somone who was evil...and they do ever think about the consequences?
6770773
Didn't you read the ending? Starlight still retains her ability to manipulate people through words.
Nice story! I like how you characterized Starlight.
Heh, poor Glim Glams.
This was a good one, Majin. You did good.
6771584 Thank you! It was a little tough to pin her down, honestly.
I was expecting ....I don't know...porn, weird fetish, self-insert-power-bullshit-story, anything with anon.....
And you gave me something that I could actually see in an episode.
You have surprised me, good job
6772815 I'm apparently good at surprising people,
Am I the only one who could easily see this story as a Season 6 episode?
6773454
The beginning of one, perhaps. The pre-credits intro plus a few minutes after.
Needs moar though.
Man, great fic! Really nailed down Starlight's personality I'd think. As other people have said, feels like something from the show as well. Insta-fav for me. ^^
6770197
Oddly enough, this actually feels more complete to me in the original 750-word minific. I feel like it's caught in this weird place where it's more complete as a story less than half its current size, but incomplete until it's expanded even further.
Strange.
6770762 *1 day and 11 hours later*
12 dislikes
So, she'd either be screwed over or left without her cherry. I'm pretty sure it's some kind of a paradox
6775416
They were all robbing her and trolling her for things that didn't happen. That was extremely awful of all those ponies. It upset me.