For several months there have been attacks from strange monsters that the ponies of Equestria have never seen before. On the day of the Summer Sun Celebration, a star falls from the sky and crash lands in the Everfree Forest, and produces a warrior that has the power of ridding the Kingdom of Equestria of the strange monsters...a tiny, round, and pink warrior named Kirby.
With the return of Nightmare Moon, Kirby ends up helping Twilight Sparkle search for the Elements of Harmony to stop her from keeping the night eternal.
Chapters (2)
cant wait for the next chapter for the fight scene
oohhh could this be a stroy from a group that still has the chance of being alive? I mean a story that isn't dead in a goup. Not that Kirby would be bad, but I kind of expected the first two storys to be from 2000 or something.
I'm going to read it, so please make an update soon.
please don't let this story die, I just noticed every other Kirby story is dead, like the storys in groups usually are, since no one cleans up their groups.
I maybe should do something else once in a while again, even if it is in the middle of the week and I have to work, but I wanted to entertain myself with some storys, that....get more updates once in a while.
Okay the second half came out wrong, but I didn't knew how I wanted to say it anymore, since I got interrupted just now.
I think I forgot again to say that I liked it.
I wish I could just tell you, but that would ruin the suprise. ...soory there are some things I can't get over. I mean no matter how you probably look at it, it is more or less stupid from Celestia to let Twilight do everything, even if it is just a cartoon and at the start, I haven't thought much about it.
I hope you can forgive my....if you can call it like that "spamming" today. The first time I made the comment while searching for this story, and the third after finishing it.
I wanted to make a third comment in chase you wouldn't notice the change I made in my comment, in chase you had read it already.
When is next chapter?
Seriously, when IS the next chapter?
Are you going to update or what?
Please! Please continue this story! Don't let it die!!!
Please update! I'd give this story at least 1 million more likes
Please, the next part please.vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/kirby/images/d/d4/K20AC_Kirby5.png/revision/latest?cb=20120622175802&path-prefix=en
Well I like it. I just hope this was the story where Celestia didn't suddenly new about Kirbys legend and every other alien. I prefer it if it is evena suprise to them. I mean their ong life doesn't means, that they where interessted enough to learn about everything, figuring everything out what there is to see and stuff like that.
I agree with Texus. If Celestia knows then it would be really really weird. I kind of hate the cliche nowadays because it makes Celestia kind of all knowing and utterly useless if she knew about this before hand. Besides this could be like King Dedede. Think about it. All the cake she loves and Kirby really enjoys eating without stopping.
I'm looking forward to the story though.
I also agree with Texus. Its rather cliche how Celestia knows about kirby
7839958 I don't think she knows about this yet does she? Maybe I need to reread the first chapter again.
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No she doesn't know about Kirby so that's good then.
Hope Kirby can summon allies like in Kirby Super Star and Kirby Ultra Star.
Continuing? I would like to see what other abilities he would use. There aren't many ways to get abilities in the Everfree. Unless your also gonna include every hat that Kirby had worn. That's 63 powers.
Animal, Archer, Backdrop, Ball, Balloon, Beam, Beetle, Bell, Bomb, Bubble, Burning, Circus, Clean, Copy, Cupid, Cutter, Doctor, ESP, Fighter, Fire, Freeze, Ghost, Hammer, Hi-Jump, Hypernova, Ice, Jet, Laser, Leaf, Magic, Metal, Mini, Mirror, Missile, Needle, Ninja, Parasol, Plasma, Poison, Smash bros, Spark, Spear, Stone, Suplex, Sword, Throw, Tornado, UFO, Water, Wheel, Whip, Wing, Yo-yo.
The one time powers like Cook, Crash, Light, Mike, Paint, Sleep.
And the anime also had Baton, Iron, Top, and Kabuki.
I NEEDUH MONSTA TA CLOBBA DAT DAIR AUTHOR if he doesn't update this.
NintendoBrony64, you said that it won't take long to post the next chapter. You're not keeping your promise.
There something, i like so much about kirby.... is his transformations, especially Sword Kirby😊
There so many type of kirby's transformation: Fire - Sword (Galaxia) - Bomb - Stone - Cook - Fighter- Cutter - Cleaning - Hammer- Ice - Iron - Jet - Mike - Mirror - Needle - Ninja - Paint - Parasol - Crash - Baton - Spark - Throw - Top - Tornado - Water - Wheel - Wing - Star Rod.