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The Dark Brony


Hello all! I am and Englishman who had now began to write and has just stepped out the proverbial broney closet.

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There are many reasons why you shouldn’t trust a shady man who hands you a strange letter, but being sent to another reality to fight the Krawl from Spectrobes is not one of those things.

Now fighting to for not only their survival but that of The Lucena System, Jack and Jen along with the power of the Spectrobes must fight to defend everyone from destruction but also to find what was thought to be lost years before.

A Spectrobes/MLP Crossover

This is a collaboration with Solphestus please look at some more of his amazing work as this story could not be done without him.

Arc 1 - Chapters 1 to 6

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 40 )

Hmmm...... This is interesting. *Reads first two chapters. Is intrigued*

6816875 this is only the begining... :trollestia:

6816916 I'll be up for crossing with your story when you are open :pinkiehappy:

6817164 Once it come up, we will contact you. :pinkiehappy:

6817204 I'm up for it *Thumbs up!*

This is nice, I would like to crossover too please, even if you did just use my first choice for which Spectrobe I wanted. Ah well, I suppose I can choose another one.

6894086 Whenever we need another Crossover we will drop you a message to sort something out

6894463 No problem, I'll give your gamer displaced a read too, I might like to cross with that as well.

6894511 when you want to cross with that drop me a message but it will be miles ahead of whats there

Comment posted by Solphestus deleted Feb 3rd, 2016

Still looking for instructor for that school? I'd like to volunteer.

6898713 Talk to FrostTheWolf, he will be able to help you

SO, who liked the first ark of this story?

Who are the two in the cover art?

6904701 thats Rallen and Jeena. Rallen is Jack and Jeena is Jen in our story

6904701 Rallen and Jena, they are the two main characters in the Spectrobes games and Jack and Jen look just like them after being displaced.

Intriguing. However, the word-flow becomes stilted at times. And, as someone with no experience with Spectrobes, it's a little off-putting to have to imagine white-spaces called 'Windora and Pinorska' where the action is taking place due to lack of description.

6909089 Okey sorry for that I have attached a few images for the Spectrobes if you are interested

I enjoyed the Spectrobes games, especially the Wii version. This should be good.

6909089 I gotta agree. The author needs an editor or beta reader.

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Thank you, the hotfix is appreciated. Now just try to watch the sentence structure, and I'm sure you'll see an upswing in readers. :ajsmug:

Man, this is gonna be good.

Not bad, next is mine I assume?

We are now taking suggestions for things to do in future chapters!

Yeash, I could see that last bit coming a mile away, but it's still somewhat heart wrenching.

7032582 you knew something like this was going to happen sooner or later... and you know what's going to happen later so please keep quiet.

Murphy’s Law… Jen what will you cause today?

You'd think she'd learn after what happened back in my verse.

7044527 you'd think that... but she hasn't

The Prizmod is a device used to contain and manage Spectrobes. They can only be used by certain people, who are called Spectrobe Masters. Prizmods are found throughout the Spectrobes universe, but it is unknown where they were made/where they come from

Hey, I had this game on DS! Good game. Liking.

Oh, hell yeah. I loved this game on ds. Good to see it being recognised

“Last chance,” Cruger said as Discord literally turned white, “turn the mad scientist back, and leave in one piece, or become her new project, and leave in several pieces. either way, no one will notice the difference.”

love that:coolphoto:

Can we get a list of all other story used in this chapter

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