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Grave Walker
"I am the epitome of an overdose. Living with retradily amounts of happiness and barely mentally functioning."
Grave Walker
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Dear God is this an amazing story, why doesn't this have more like? This is amazing! I must keep reading! Hopefully it stays this f***ing good!
Yup, it's still good. No scratch that. It getting better!
Yup, new favorite story. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
The concept is not bad, but aside for the grammar errors, the story seems a bit rushed in my opinion.
As a side note, I think you should add the Anthro tag considering that the Equestrians are neither human nor quadrupedal ponies.
I LOVE IT .3. MAKE MORE! i actually liked the halo games and the aliens so i really enjoyed this. btw can you make him fight the mane six please .3. make a twist ending >:D
7092170 Done.
7092483 glade your enthusiastic about my story.
7092114 what exactly do you find most enjoyable?
7092170.... How did I know I'd find you around here XD
Keep working hard Grave Walker! It looks promising!
7092811 I feel the way your wrote Nova 'Vadam is spot on for a Sangheili. He's hunting out of the need for food, but he doesn't over hunt, he kills when he must and kills those that wronged his point of view or the laws that he follows. Still he holds his honor above all else and isn't blood hungry all the time. This is how I always imagined how a Sangheili would be outside of the war. So in all I'm reading this to find out how the main character will react to the ponies trying to make friends with him.
Wouldn't an Elite just kill them for the honor?
7093093 Whats the glorious honor in killing things that are equal to a fly to us humans.
7093046 Thank you, that is what I'm been most focused on when writing this story. I've been trying to make sure he fits in his character and to be a total badass at the same time.
7092998 He is a fellow Sangheili lover as I. In fact, his story actually inspired my jumbled up thoughts to make something I'm actually prod of.
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Good one.
I liked this up to the point where I got to the 3rd chapter. Once this character starts just cutting up and killing guards who probably have families and made a loyal oath, I can't really say I have anymore interest in following this character in the story if he's supposed to be the protagonist.
7092998 Wort wort wort!
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7093205 Really? Well, glad to hear it
7093243 Hmm, I'm not sure. His clan name lacks the suffix 'ee, so either he's not a member of the Covenant or he had not yet took part to a military operation, earning the right to use the suffix. Furthermore, he's a member of the Vadam clan, so...
7093695 Someone is already figuring out his past!
And I haven't even wrote it yet!
7093629 He is not the villain of the story and more will be explained in chapter 4: Not gonna tell ya! Also, some (hart breaking) feels inbound.
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7094744 Not angry, no, just surprised really.
7094773 Well, I'm just using a bit of reasoning along with my knowledge from the lore.
Interesting
This story so far is pretty amazing, take my like Sir!
7092052 True
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Wunderbar!
7103733 By what means is this blasphemy text!?
7103736 Thou knows not who thine speaks to. Nay, thou knows not...
7103746 Same goes to you. I only replied in such a manner was because I see that "word" as gibberish.
7103760 It's a German expression for the english word 'wonderful', knave.
7103770 Oh, thank you for that comment then. What makes it most wunderbar?
7103776 Sehr viele Dinge, of course.
Can't wait for the next encounter with sentiment life.
7154731 your prayers to your god (me) have been answered.
This is getting good!
7156369 glade your liking it.
Good story, but you might want to look for an editor. The typos and grammar errors drew me out of the book annoyingly often, and I hate to see such a good premise be ruined by a lack of an editor. Otherwise great idea, I hope you keep working on this and improve as a writer!
7156494 thank you. I'll look for an editor then.
7156340
Wohooooo!
Yup this starts of very nice so much detail
7177176 glade you enjoy it.
more will come soon.
7156340 YOUR NOT MY GOD! SCIENCE IS!
7177454 ✋ ⚐☠☹✡ ????????☜✌???? ✋☠ ????✋☠☝????✋☠☝???? ☠⚐????✏ ☞☜✌☼ ????☜✏
7179581 You make absolutely no seance sometime. You know that?
7178529 Silence mortal! No blasphemy here!
7196792 MAGIC IS MY BITCH *throws a Tsar Bomb*
7196939
Seriously?
7196960 yes because science bitch
love...how in the hell do you taste love?
When will the next be comin out?
7204000 Soon, I just need an a damn editor. I've been looking for an editor for a week now, all of the people I contact have not replied or say no. I feel a bit pissed about that, but I guess I'm not worth their time.