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The Accursed One


>tfw you realise you're a generic white girl

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Charming Tale, an author. Silver Flare, a scientist. One requests the presence of the other through a bird, and they explore uncharted lands. They find a temple, some treasure, and maybe even something a little more...

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Good, pretty good. One thing that oh so slightly bothered me was how Charming switched to a grumpy pony real fast for some reason, sure he kinda changed at the end but that rapid change still kinda bothers me.
Anyway, I'm not critic. Still, good story and I'm interested to see where this goes.:twilightsmile:

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She has a quick temper, and Silver's antics got to her quickly.

6766755 Ok, thanks for explaining

A few portraits, I assumed of the owner and their family, hung on the walls. The signature on the paintings noted that the artist was named Canvas. 'Appropriate name for the artist,' I thought.

Ooh, nice reference~ I approve. :pinkiehappy:

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