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{Proofread by Midge Mannequin.} Long in the service of Princess Celestia, the Starlit have worked in secret for centuries, enforcing her rule during the night by hunting down unspeakable monstrosities and by crushing conspirators who would dare try to overthrow her. However, in a time when the Elements of Harmony have defeated foe after foe, the Princess wished to disband these secret police of hers until the events of the Changeling War proved that she still needed them. They've set their eyes on her prized student, she reluctantly allows Twilight Sparkle to join their ranks, both to learn how to better defend Equestria and to keep an eye on her Agents of the Dark.

After the fateful encounter with the creature Caprice, Twilight finally learns about the insidious Sisterhood of the Night and their goals for Equestria. Can she make it back to Canterlot in time to impede their dark designs?

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Fascinating premise. I'd considered writing something short myself wherein the Elements take a little combat training with the Royal Guard due to their failure in that episode, but this is a much more interesting approach. Looking forward to seeing how Twilight's magic of friendship affects the Starlit. :)

710274 Actually, now that you mention it, having the Mane Six training with the Royal Guard does sound interesting. I'm getting giggly just thinking about Rarity and Fluttershy in a military organization. :flutterrage::raritycry:

...Go for it, man.:trollestia:

LOL I can see twi will like some of her new job:twilightsmile:

He then pulled (past tense) out an apple and takes (not past tense) a loud CRUNCH out of it, chewing it for a few moments, then swallowing.

that "takes" should be "took"

What kind of world world is this where somepony can be eaten by a giant pile of shapeshifting slime? Duplicate word

782925 Fixed. Guess I should be glad that the only complaints I'm getting are about typos.

OMFG this looks positively evil, can't wait to read it :pinkiecrazy:

This series kind of reminds me of Torchwood with Twilight being Gwen Cooper, the person in the group who has a life outside the agency.

1053259 You know, you're the second person who's ever told me that the story reminds you of Torchwood, when truth be told, I've never actually watched it. :twilightblush: I have watched quite a bit of Doctor Who, though.

50 bits says the Duchess is part of the Sisterhood of the Night:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Awesome, keep up the good work!!:pinkiehappy:

Rip last chapter XD. Just got into the good stuff

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