In a world ravaged by a zombie outbreak, runners are the last hope for the dwindling numbers of humanity. Rainbow Dash, a self-named legend of the current age, is the best runner they know, but she has secrets nobody must ever know of.
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I can't wait to see the next chapter.
6832811 Thanks, glad you're enjoying it so far
rainbow's current state in the first chapter can be summoned up in this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lmc21V-zBq0 ...yea there wasn't much tension in the first chapter which in my opinion is either the thing that makes it or breaks it.
6837779 I didn't plan for it to be very tension heavy to be honest. It was more of a personal test to see how well I would be able to write in first person, which is something I've had trouble with in the past.
I'm not sure if you enjoyed the story or not, but I appreciate the review anyway.
6837875 I enjoyed what was there but in my opinion while dash was running you could have scene where everything goes slow-motion and dash looks back at the zombie horde, that brief glimpse was more then enough for her to see the terror behind her. Zombies jumping over small obstacles, zombies sprinting after her with there mouths open and even then when dash looks in front of her there's zombies on her sides running after her, trying to tackle her as she dodges leaps and lounges. that would have been epic
6838061 These aren't those kind of zombies though. These are classic slow moving strong zombies. Not as slow as the stereotype usually is of course, but slow. There's just so many. I do plan to have chaser zombies and other types join the fray later on, but as of these first 3 chapters, they basically don't exist.
Time will fix that though.
6843039 Ok then, thx for clearing the path. But to be honest it feels a bit like your just trying to express an idea. And the setting feels somewhat similar to Dying light (zombie game)
6843280 No problem
As a side note, how did you feel about that game, Dying Light. I don't know anybody else who has played it, so I'd like some input. Personally I felt like it was great, until the ending.
6843646 I haven't really played Dying light(But I have seen angry joe's review of the game) , but I got the feel of it. a first person park-or shooter were the feel was to just run. did u get the same feeling?
6843910 Basically, yea. You're given the choice to fight, as long as its daytime. But at night these super zombies come out and you can't do anything but parkour away, unless you're a high level of have great weapons.
It was a great game, and had fun multiplayer modes, but the story was pretty lackluster.
6843957 That's one of the thing angry joe said. Here I'll link the vid. PS "Hay Joe you wanna play a zombie game?" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hUnb8VQYtWI
6844343 I agree with everything he said
6844591
You should watch a few reviews, their pretty good. Anyway, see you later
this is one of the best zombie fics iv read
6878274 Hey thanks! Glad you think so
More za doctor requires MORE AHAHAH richtofen is pleased