Yay A new chapter.

"C'mon, I want to show you so many thing Matt."

Things not thing

What!? The ending man!

Great chapter! This is where the bow comes in handy. Woo! Their in Equestria!

6835702 Fixed it :P

So he will get a bow.. But he won't get a fucking gun!?!?! You'd think after all the shit he's been through he would have one!

6835881 1. No guns in Equestria.

2. You have to be at least 21 (In Florida anyway) to legally own a firearm. If he was older, I probably would have had him get one by now.

6835894 Well I know about 1, and second his parents could buy him a gun to keep in his car

6835909 In the first chapter I said Matt's dad had a M1911, so I suppose that could come into play later.

6835913 That would work, personally I prefer a 44. revolver all black. (It looks cool and functions well)

Another awesome chapter! LOVE IT!

I myself have a compound bow. They are fun as hell

I think the show and this world are two different things

Well, yeah.

The show is created by people IRL, but due to infinite alternate universes there would be a universe that directly correlates to the show.

Why do I get the feeling that scream was Lyra?

"What happened to going to bed?" I say as I hold me phone between my legs limply.

me != my

"Holy crap! Are these those bits you were talking about Rainbow!?" I say as I take one out of the bad. They're surprisingly heavy, but I guess that's to be expected from gold.

bad != bag

Now I now how she felt her first few weeks back on Earth.

now i now != now i know

"Oh course you are."

2 choices: 1) "Oh, course you are" 2) "Of course you are"

I just love to correct grammar errors! :D :D .D

6894882 Hey, so good to see you rebooted friend!

I don't think that I've ever seen a more strategicly placed purchase in my life.