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NerdyByrd


I'm an artist/writer who loves Rainbow Dash. I'm also trying to write a little bit of every type of story.

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Rainbow Dash is fearless! Everypony knows that! But she suddenly gets a creepy feeling she being watched. She starts seeing things in the shadows; in the dark. Her minds playing tricks on her. That explains it! But then what explains the creepy hooded pony who seems to be following her, and the fact that Celestia is more jumpy then usual. Or the fact that she has nightmares every night about a colt who keeps giving her answers, but leaving her with more questions.

Note: In this series, some events that took place in the show, don't take place in this fanfiction. Therefore, some things are different from the TV show. Also, the cover image was created by me, using some images off the internet and the website picmonkey.

A special thanks to my editor and assistant, Shade Av-Dragen!

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 36 )

Rainbow Dash wanted to go home, but Twilight was eating this stuff up." I'm guessing we're here to research."

Nope! "Peace guys", Rainbow Dash quickly said," As you should know I suck at research, and I get very... ummm... distracted. Yeah. Distracted."

I'm so done right now! :rainbowlaugh:

Well, it has an interesting start - I'll keep an eye on this. Also, Shadowbolts do not bode well. :twilightoops:

Pinke-buster's!!! When there's a fourth wall break, and you don't know why, who you gonna call, PINKE-BUSTER'S!!!:pinkiecrazy:

Rainbow, "Life is Strange"!!!:rainbowderp:

The Truths, The Lies, and A Phoenix Wright Reference!!!

Can you find the Phoenix Wright reference?:rainbowhuh:

I like the start very interesting! Good job!! :yay: :heart: :rainbowlaugh:

I just thought this would be funny "Go, Go Friendship Rangers!" :ajsmug::pinkiesmile::rainbowdetermined2::twilightblush::yay::raritystarry:

Wow, that's a lot of names to keep track off. :twilightoops::applejackconfused:

7497381 Yeah. It is a little confusing, but look on the bright side! It won't happen again! The only thing that will make your brain hurt for now on is Pinkie Pie doing the impossible!:pinkiehappy:

To...Many......REFERENCES!!!!!!!!!!:trollestia:

Will read it eventually but...

Anyways, PEACE OUT! :rainbowdetermined2:

-HoneyFeather

I Deposit time in to 'Check' City Bank.

Sorry for being a little mean I just saw a option for a joke. Sorry.

Everybody reading this, give your honest to goodness opinion of what you think of this story as a whole so far. :twilightsmile:

Flaws: 1

The came to the crystal castle that stood in the daytime.

THEY came, is what would fit better. Ok.

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I published it late last night. If you think you see an error, just call it out.

Huh, I wonder why Nightmare Moon wants Rainbow? Maybe it's something about her family. Oh well, I'll have to unfortunately wait...:applejackunsure:

7691272 Gotta love those missing puzzle pieces!

Exactly 2500 words. :derpyderp2: nice. Keep it up, really getting onto this.

My guess is that Rainbow is infected by Nightmare Moon, and Nightmare's powers are leaking into Dash. But Hey, that's just a theory. A STORY THEORY! Thanks for watching!

I think it has to do with rainbow dashes origin

Maybe she shot lightning at the shadow wolf, duh.:pinkiesmile:

7766434 I don't know if it was the emoji or what, but the way you wrote that reminded me of something Pinkie Pie would say! :rainbowlaugh:

Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story? Will she be reaching Unstoppable Rage levels of anger? Will she be giving out any No Holds Barred Beatdowns?

This was an interesting story, I liked it. :ajsmug: Can't wait for the next one! :twilightsmile:

Interesting story. Truth in some places I could not understand, but read with pleasure. I hope to see a continuation of this story. I hope that the second part will be better than the first. Good luck in the works.

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