After going to a PAX Prime with a friend I find a man that looks like the Merchant form resident evil 4 and got a good deal for a cloak that was missing from my costume, thing came up short when I get thrown into the world of Equestria.
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Pretty good but you need to space the paragraphs a bit, I got lost like three time. You have seal of Fucking approval my friend
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If You ever want to crossover, send me a PM or message me through my user page.
6745387 ty for the seal, and I get the space between fix, I looked back and saw that -_-
I'll get the token up for him to start crossovers soon like in a chapter or 2
6745454 Be warned, I know what magic the gathering is but not it's rules, items and etc.
6745462 don't worry I have a plan to make things simple to learn, I think I'm going to do a explain chapter of how his magic works and shit
I think this is good story so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.
Is that a rhetorical question?
...dude... not cool...
Jace Beleren, a master of five colors? You're joking, right I know he's powerful. Planes walkers are, but he's a Blue caster, illusions, counter spells, and mind magic (aka milling). I dunno, seems like giving Chandra or Garruk Gideon's abilities. I'm assuming, of course. *shrug*
There are a lot of spelling errors and run-on sentences in this chapter. It's not a very good first impression.
6897034 Color identities can change over time. Maybe this displaced is just a step short of transcending color, same as Ugin did.
6897034 That said I do think he should have stuck to the monoblue. Or used an OC with a unique theme and color identity.
>Jace >Prismatic deck >wat?
Talk about a sketchy opening. Considering it's not actually Jace though, meh.
Good idea, good execution, but...
YOU NEED AN EDITOR!!!
Seriously! There are so many grammar mistakes that if this were an English project you'd get like a D or something!
Haven't heard of Townsville since I was 6.
Interesting start, don't really know much about MtG.