You just go on and rate your fics however you want to rate them. I'm just happy the Shadowbolt Ladies are back in action. I honestly prefer the antics of your Sugarcoat and Sour Sweet to Sunset & Twilight.

"Being a responsible adult sucks."

Preach it, girl,

This is going to be fun. Instant following Because I damn feel like it!

Why are they so worried about sleeping with Sour Sweet? Did something happen in a previous installment that I don't remember?

6784454 Pretty sure they just don't want to deal with her personality.

Am I the only pony who thinks Twilight in this episode is cute? She's like the Fluttershy out of the group.

You reading this I imagined it'd be Equestria Girls meets The Hangover. Though seems to not be the case.

Rather there is a lot of tension here, though more than just the aggressive kind.

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Probably just the fact there's a non-zero probability she'll wake up in a bad mood and murder her partner in their sleep.

Man, Sugercoat's lines are just pure gold here!

Sour Sweet though... man, I'm really feeling for her, poor girl. There is clearly an underlying issue here that is really bothering her, and they just went and made it worse. Indigo and Lemon were especially unmindful- they literally just heard her confession of feelings of unwantedness mere hours prior! If it wasn't for the fact that Sunny was looking after Twilight, I'm betting she would have roomed with her.

I can only imagine that things will go deeper from here. And knowing Sour Sweet, it could very well end in an explosion.

That would be a dream come true for me seeing indigo, lemon, and sugarcoat sharing a bed, but I do feel bad for sour

Poor Sour Sweet... I bet Sunny would've gone with her if she hadn't promised Twilight first.... Heck, if I could jump into the story, I would've shared a room with her!!!!

Nice job so far! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh, and edit... This is on the front page of FiM Fic!!! Nice job!!!

Sugarcoat flirting?
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My respect for the lady has heightened tenfold.

"We passed a service station not too far back. I'll just take a walk, get enough gas to get us to the next station, and we'll be on our way.

If she was smart, she'd get that gas, put it in the car, double back to the station she just walked to, and fill up there since they know there's a station there to fill up at. Too many people make this mistake.

You girls chill, listen to some tunes, and

run the battery down so we'll have an even bigger problem later!

Lemon smiled. "Is that all? Well that's okay! There are ways to tell! Do you ever think about girls when you're-"

"Let's not go there, please!" Indigo Zap raised her hands in protest. "I don't need to hear about my friends' masturbation habits."

"So what do you want to do first when we get to Las Pegasus?"

"Right now? Get a shower. Ewe..." Twilight looked down at herself.

So why was she sitting on/holding a tiny sheep?

How they can convince you that something physiologically impossible is actually happening even when you know it's not possible."

I think you mean physically impossible, unless the magician is pulling live birds out of his ass...

Sour Sweet's cluster F-bomb cracked me up because I can totally hear her going off like that.

"I'm just glad we don't have to walk all the way back with this thing. Even just a few gallons is pretty heavy." Indigo explained as she and Lemon dumped what they had purchased into the tank from their canister.

What the...

Girl, just...

...no!

You can fill the tank from the pump! You don't need to empty your backup can into the tank! You NEED that backup can of gas just in case!

Oy.

I mean, I know they're teenagers, but...oy.

Poor Sour.

Great start, can't wait to see what crazy things happen to these ripe, innocent virgins strong, independent young women in the next installment!

"I won't make you do anything you don't want to." -- that is such a cliche phrase! Nobody ever talks like that, except maybe an actual rapist.

Sour Sweet still wins everything.

I'd hate to be near Sour Sweet when she's on her period.

You are too good at Sugarcoat and Sour Sweet. Just... Wow.

"I'll stay with Sunny." Twilight was instantly clinging to Sunny's arm.

Sunny just gave her a comforting smile. "That sounds fine to me."

Alright, we got ourselves a new ship here, and we shall call it SunLight. Wait...no we already have that. Uh.....SunnyLight? No sounds similar Um.....SunnySparkle? Nah...um......I got nothing. :P

Obligatory musical reference GO!

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6795086 Sure, that works.

This is my favorite version of "The Spectacle"
I like to think it was this version they were listening to in the car, Lol

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I have this image of Sour snoring as crazily as she talks. Sweet little sniffle in, BEAR NOISES AND SCREAMING OUT.

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Maybe she just reverses. Instead of starting off pleasant and then putting an angry spin on it she starts off vicious and then turns it around into a compliment. Hormones can do some pretty weird things.

Indigo should volunteered to sleep with Sour, would a been the mature thing to do.

Sour Sweet interrupted. "I'm not telling you who I get off to anyway!"

The other girls grew suspicious of her when she gave a like to all that slaughterhouse videos Eco Kids post on facebook...