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Touch the Sky


*strokes blanket* I am a good writer. I am a good writer. I am a good writer...

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"You bought me a star!"

How do you break away from a relationship when your other half is willing to buy the stars for you? Rainbow Dash doesn't know. But she does know some things. Like the fact that she needs to be free, like the stars. And that Twilight is trying to collect the stars.

Rainbow also knows that Twilight won't be able to change her ways. And when she begins to fall for another free spirit, it is very hard not to simply cut the ropes holding her back from the freedom she desires.

Unashamedly inspired by 'Buy the Stars' by Marina and the Diamonds.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

Great job so far, didn't really spot any errors.


Is this gonna lead into Yandere Twilight? (Or something similar?)

Hopefully, you're continuing.

welp. one thing for sure. I need more lol :rainbowderp: this is interesting and I like it

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I will be continuing, whenever inspiration strikes me!

Thanks for reading!

Why doesn't this story have an adventure tag?

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Lifted from the Writing Guide on this site:

Adventure stories are all about massive disruptions to the status quo and generally follow groups of heroes in their crusades to defeat villains (like Trixie or Discord), or find some MacGuffin (like the Elements of Harmony), or even just return to their homes.

This story isn't an adventure story. They aren't going anywhere or fighting anyone.

dawww poor applejack

Applejack didn't notice, as she was hung up on something else. "I'm yer best friend?"
Rainbow looked up and smiled again. "Sure! I have five best friends and a marefriend! Aren't I one of your best friends?"
Applejack's ears drooped a little, but only for a second before she grinned widely.

Very nice story do far! Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

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