Old Saint Nick

Sunset Shimmer never believed in Santa Claus or the fantastic stories surrounding him, especially when someone like Pinkie Pie tries to convince her that he's real, and everyone knows to take everything she says with a grain of salt. However, the two teenage girls are thrust into an extraordinary situation when Sunset finds a strange old man lying on the snow in front of her house one night just days before Christmas.

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Super Trampoline

Super Trampoline #1 · Dec 16th, 2015 · 1 · ·

This is the Christmasiast Christmas story.

crooked

crooked #2 · Dec 16th, 2015 · 1 · ·

What. The end. What was it.

porcelain-clown

porcelain-clown #3 · Dec 16th, 2015 · · 1 ·

Very festive story! I loved it. It's certainly a Christmas tale to remember.

Color Nova

Color Nova #4 · Dec 16th, 2015 · · ·

Cute.

Ultimate Bromaeda

Ultimate Bromaeda #5 · Dec 16th, 2015 · · ·

whoa, you’re right Pinkie! He is real! I’m sorry for saying he wasn’t. I’m Sunset Shimmer.

RazDelacroix

RazDelacroix #6 · Dec 17th, 2015 · · 1 ·

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Twas a Christmas/Yuletide/WhateverHoliday Rainboom-Induced Miracle. By extending friendship to another despite not being whom Pinkie wanted him to be, and no matter how short that time together was, a friendship was formed. And perhaps, some peace of mind was gifted upon this holy night.

I for one enjoyed this story!

Ri2

Ri2 #7 · Dec 17th, 2015 · · ·

…So he really WASN'T Santa? That's a twist.

Vutava

Vutava #8 · Apr 18th, 2016 · · ·

Typo Report:

It was the usual fair that played during the Christmas season.

fare

She does seem to admire Rainbow Dash a lot.

did

“That’ll be awesome, wouldn’t it?”

That'd or That would

Sunset and Rainbow Dash started started first, but Rainbow performed a guitar riff that

Fluttershy just follow the rhythm with her tambourine.

followed

Rainbow Dash announced the rehearsal to be over, since the morning were going to start in several minutes.

morning classes were?

For me, one of things I enjoy about Christmas is the music.

of the things

Last year Octavia performed it as a cello solo, and it really beautiful,

it was really

“If you ask me, then that will make for truly be fantastic performance.”

a truly

Featherweight, who was the one who had set it up, leaned forward to both of them for a kiss, which, unfortunately for him the two dodged his smooches just in time. They chuckled as they watched Diamond Tiara become disgusted of his advances.

kiss. Unfortunately for him,
at

Lyra Heartstrings, an acquaintance of Sunset,

Sunset's

Recently, there was always in instance where one person,

Shifting her gaze from side of the cafeteria to the other, nothing looked as anything strange was going to happen,

from on side
it didn't look as though would work better.

Sunset just sat and stared, then said

said,

Pinkie frustratingly sat up,

, frustrated,

The bell rang, meaning that lunch break has ended. Sunset Shimmer and the girls continued the school day learning about things they’ll probably forget later in life.

had
they'd

On her way home and through the night she thought about what she said.

she'd or she had

She watched a series of informative videos from the human world's’ leading thinkers -

world's

The ambulance is on their way?

way.

“Doesn’t that only supposed to happen on Christmas Eve?”

Isn't

“It doesn’t happen as normally as much as I want it to.”

Rainbow Dash reminded them of their schedule rehearsal for Yulefest,

scheduled

Pinkie and Sunset sat on chairs that was close to the entrance.

were

There was a Christmas tree standing in one corner from her left.

She couldn’t ignore it. He has to be the big man in red.

had

The pink strands of her hair twitched again, her right tapped lightly tapped.

foot

“I absolutely, positively, super sure that Nick is Santa Claus!”

I'm or I am

Before closing her letter, she asks Twilight if she remembers her parents telling

asked
remembered

Pinkie explained that she believed she had found Santa Claus, and he is currently at the hospital recovering.

was

The band continued, which unfortunately for them,

though

Too distracted to keep up with her bandmates Pinkie decided to end the rehearsal.

bandmates,

She’d always it will come in handy someday.

thought it would or known it would

How could such a man do things like that at his old age?”

She witness the next child go up to Nick.

witnessed

“Don’t make the bad guy!

make me

Sunset, with gentleness and care, held Pinkie hand, and together led themselves away from the giant Christmas tree.

Pinkie's
they led

The sticks aimlessly and without force bang the drums.

banged

When the guitars stopped play, the other instruments ceased.

playing

He held the book over his face in the hopes that nobody will see him.

would

Nick recognized as the friend of the pink girl.

her as

“Nick,” she said, “if you’re going to skip, at least come to Yulefest tonight.”

skip town,

That way she’ll be happy to see one last time before you go.”

see you

It was contagious, but of the good kind.

At an instant she tone down her excitement and stared at Sunset with genuine happiness.

After a moment she toned

The house in front of them continued to blink glorious.

gloriously.

A few days ago I’ve done some research.

I did

did the magical blast killed the old man or transported to another plane of existence, and where;

kill
transport

“After being struck with that blast of magic, my mind, body, and soul was sent on a journey across many spiritual dimensions.

were

Sunset confusingly nodded her head.

, confused,

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