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MistressAnput


I am too curious for my own good and too many ideas in my head I need to set free.

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Lavender Bliss thought that her friendship with Sunset Shimmer would last forever. But a car accident takes her friend away and she falls into a state of depression and resents friendship.

But when she goes to her new school, Canterlot High, she comes face to face with her dead friend. Except.. This is someone else entirely. This is not her Sunset Shimmer. She is so different in how she acts and how she treats Lavender. Soon she is taken into a world where another world exists, where she may actually consider friendship again.

But friendship only ends in pain and suffering. It is not magical, it is not something that lasts forever. Not ever this Sunset Shimmer can convince her that friendship is worthwhile.

This story was edited by The Fairy Editor and Nonagon.

This story takes place after The Friendship Games and I thought of it while watching Sci-Twi and Twilight Sparkle at that last scene.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 12 )

It's really good so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. I will say that I think it would be better if you wrote more about how Lavender and the others are thinking, and just all around expanding on the individual chapters. It just seems a bit rushed so far, but the idea is a very interesting one.

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Thank you very much for the suggestion. Rereading what I have written so far, I agree. I'll try my hardest with future chapters.

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If you want any more feedback I'll be more then happy to give some :twilightsmile:

8524741
It's much appreciated. This is my second story and I'm still rough around the edges with this kind of stuff.

Ouch, hopefully she doesn't have brain damage after that.

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Nothing more than a large bump, I assure you. :twilightsheepish:

This is awesome
Please update

It's Taco Tuesday!

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I'm certainly trying. I'm having this weird dry spell and depression thing. I have the next chapter in my docs that needs to be completely rewritten.

Well, that was a thing.

Wow.... that climax though. So I was expecting Sunset to die from the car crash obviously, but I wasn't expecting a beheading of Sunset from the crash. How'd that even happen?

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