After Twilight finishes her research on a new spell, she finds herself presenting it in person to her longtime mentor. The meeting between the two brings back old memories, new questions, and familiar feelings.
Are social norms more important than one's feelings? Is a love that is considered 'wrong' worth seeing through?
Update 12/29/12: Okay, so I'll be going on hiatus until I get a better idea of how this will be going. When I come back, I'll be beginning by revising the first few chapters for flow and character bingbangbozzles. So, until then, happy reading!
Chapters (4)
Interesting start, not sure about switching between 1st and 3rd per... pony POV normally you should stick with with one or the other. But you have gotten my attention since I'm always looking for more Twilestia. Don't dissapoint.
The switch of perspective was a little jarring at times. It's always a good idea to just stick with one or the other as to not disorient your readers. Even so, I liked this, despite not being that big of a fan of the pairing.
well done, that is all
Bleh. I did the POV thing to differentiate flashbacks and present-tense but if it's bothering so many people I'll edit it later and change them to first-person.
I wait.
YES.
More Twilestia is always a treat. Good job!
Tracking.
2 chapters is when I start reading unless it's an entire story in 1 chapter. I just read both chapters, it was good.
Whooaaaaa....
Moving back to Canterlot? I've always been interested in that sort of story. What if she decided time with the Princess was worth more than her new friends way back in the beginning? Interesting to see. I wonder how everypony will react.
As to the chapter being an experiment of sorts, I quite like this result. Unless you have some reason to hate it or sincerely think you have a more interesting idea, go with it.
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Eh, that might be a good idea in a story where at least some ties have been cut, but I can't see this character saying 'all these friends I've made and share a special bond with? Eh, fuck 'em. I'm getting me some action!"
Or at least, I can't see me writing it without making it sound like that.
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Or should that be
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More like,
moar?
I like the way this story is told, I want to know where this is going though
had to re-read the entire thing, which normally ain't really that big, but as the amount i read each day has gone down significantly; that took a few days.
anyways, great chapter!
Great chapter. I really like how this story is progressing. This story deserves more attention than it has received.
Only 16 comments on a featured story? I will read to see if it is good.
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Interesting chapter
lol I had to go back to see if this is the same story I remember.
Definitely an interesting chapter.Keep it going!
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Changed my mind. THIS IS NOW A SURREAL DARK FIC.
If you're bad, it'll change into a Twist/everyone clopfic. So you keep on your toes!
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Is that so? well, not reason for me to stick around then...
...an interesting chapter
Can't wait for more romancedl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
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I was joking...that was a joke.
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I know, what I meant was: be careful what you say in the comments, some people will take it seriously....
As you obviously did.
Well now, this is might cute, if'n Ah do say so ma' self. I will most certainly be keepin' an eye on this lil' numba'.
great story can't wait for more.
This story is adorable.
You do really great at showing not telling (something I struggle with.) It's clear Twi is crushing on Celestia without you needing to come out and say it.