• Member Since 15th May, 2014
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DragonflyDreams


Pegasi are my people.

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Nothing makes Cheese Sandwich happier than using his Party throwing skills to brighten the lives of others. He thrives off their happiness, and it is enough to keep him going day after day, regardless of the quality of his own life.

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Comments ( 4 )

Thank you for the views so far guys!

Constructive Feedback is always welcome. I pretty much use this site to practice my literacy and story telling skills. Therefore, if you like or dislike my story I would really appreciate you leaving a comment to explain why you feel this way and what makes the story good or what could be improved.

Please consider leaving a comment if you are going to thumbs up/thumbs down the story. If you're too busy then no worries, but it would be a huge help if you have the time!

Thanks again!

I really don't have time for a lengthy comment, but I did enjoy the fic. There wasn't really a plot, it's true, and I wish there had been just a touch more about why Cheese led this kind of life, but this was a terrific slice of life and a very good character study of Cheese Sandwich.

6722004 Thank you very much that is very helpful! I will consider adding more to the story at a later date and perhaps including how Cheese Sandwich came to live this way. Thanks again for your feedback!

Hey guys! I've started a new group and need some people to kick it off. It's a group where you create your own contests, and enter contests made by others. My reason for making it, is that the other groups for contests and competitions are never updated. Please feel free to join and create some awesome contests for people to enter :)
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/209560/the-contest-corner

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