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LightningSword


Me. Take it or leave it.

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You know how it goes: boy visits girl, boy and girl have tea, have a good time chatting, and girl refuses to let boy leave—

Wait, what?

After a lovely evening of sipping tea and chatting, former Phantom Pony, Nocturne goes to exit Fluttershy's home for the night. But it's quite the blizzard outside tonight, the worst in decades, and Fluttershy doesn't want Nocturne to freeze to death out there. Of course, they are close friends now, and she does care for him deeply . . . perhaps too deeply.

They say cold weather brings ponies together. Just what does that insinuate? Nocturne is about to find out.

Special thanks once again to the amazing _Vidz_ for his adorable artwork!

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Hi. I don't know if I should or shouldn't read this. I hope you're not upset, Lightning. (hugs you)

6733901 It's all right. It's a good one this time. :twilightsmile:

Wow... Great story lightning. Very well written and feelings are well conveyed good job keep up the good work at your own pace of course. Also may Celestia and Luna smile down on you.:twilightsmile:

The feels...
The power...
The humor...
And that ending made me laugh out loud.
Keep on writing my friend, this was a great story!

6734006 Thanks. And thanks for the fave. :yay:

So wait! There is a romance connection between the two in the main story, but not the side stories?

I really enjoyed that story, Thank you for writing it my friend.

6734034 Technically, no. They have yet to build their relationship into something potentially romantic. I'd like for them to, but OC x Canon stories almost never do well.

Still, anything's possible. :twilightsmile:

6734043 Thank you for reading it. :twilightsmile:

Well, looks like Angel Bunny is dead...

6734071 Thanks for the favorite. :trollestia:

He thought she wanted the PP (Phantom Pony).

6734144 Heh-heh. Good one. :trollestia: Thanks for the fave.

Alright, adding to read later so I can finish She Rocks my World... good to see you back in business Lightning, stay sharp, stay shiny.

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He killed Angel.
Science states that he'll freeze much much faster than Nocture or any other pony ever would. Why, I'd be surprised if he isn't frozen solid in a few hours...

Damn, that ending made me laugh. :rainbowlaugh: The moment when Nocturne was left alone by Fluttershy, not Angel being left out in the snow. Okay, maybe both. :trollestia:

This was very well written and certainly deserves its newfound spot on the popular stories list. Great work, LightningSword :yay:

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6734523 Thanks, you guys. It's good to have people love my stories again. :twilightsmile:


6734428 Come on, it's a cartoon. The most that would happen is that Fluttershy would make Nocturne go out for a second and drag a small block of ice (with a rabbit inside) in with him. :rainbowlaugh:

Nocturne sighed, rolled his eyes, and slipped his hoof under his stark-white fedora.

M'lady.
Sorry, couldn't resist. Great story, though!

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Maybe...If she ever finds out where that curious little bunny went!
Good story :twilightsmile:

6734966 Thanks. :twilightsmile: And thanks for reading.

6733971 Thank you, and thanks for the fave, too. :pinkiesmile:

6735038 No problem Lightning.Have a good day May Luna and Celestia smile down on you.:twilightsmile:

Interesting. I'll have to look over the other ones of the nocturne-verse series. Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

So adorable! I like this story. Fave for you man! :twilightsmile:

6735159 Thanks for that, man! I appreciate it! :pinkiehappy:

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That would explain why there's such a glut of same-sex romance on this site.

Haha, Angel had that coming! :rainbowlaugh:

Into my favourites it goes. :pinkiehappy:

6735276 Thanks, I appreciate that. :scootangel:

This needs a sequel, as well as a Romance tag.

6735330 I didn't think it needed a Romance tag. It's not really all that romantic. Just silly and cute. :pinkiehappy: But sequel? Depends on how well this one does, I guess.

Thanks for the add! :twilightsmile:

Well done.

So, no GHB?
:twilightsheepish:just kidding, have a well-deserved like!!:scootangel:

Dude... This was great! Funny, brining the 'feels', a twist, and true to the characters.

“Well . . . well . . . .” By now, Nocturne’s “well” was starting to run dry.

De-lish.

Favorite! An instant classic!

6734071 AND THERE WAS MUCH REJOICING!

Nocturne’s jaw dropped low enough to the floor to make even Pinkie Pie stare in amazement. In fact, she was—unbeknownst to the two Pegasi, the pink party pony stood outside Fluttershy’s window, bundled up to her neck, looking inside with wide eyes at Nocturne’s distended jaw. “Dang, son . . .” she mumbled to herself in awe before turning and hopping away.

Random Pinkie is best Pinkie. :pinkiehappy:

6736886 Thanks so much! :twilightsmile:
6737437 Thanks for the fave! :pinkiehappy:

Wow, this story is extremely funny with the amount of innocence innuendos that Fluttershy is saying and Pinkie's reaction to Nocturne's jaw dropping. Awesome work and instant fav.

Nothing but a good ol' cup of tea! Jolly good show lad! I guess ponies and us Brits have that in common haha. :rainbowlaugh:

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6738252 Thanks, you guys. I appreciate it. :pinkiehappy:

This is a really good story, Lightning. I especially loved the ending where Angel got thrown out into the snow. :rainbowlaugh:

6739902 Thank you, and thanks for the fave! :twilightsmile:

Wow, what? LOL!
This was brilliant!

6741067 Glad you liked it. And thanks for favoriting! :twilightsmile:

can't wait to read lol

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