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Anon ymous


It may take a year or ten, generations of men. But we've passed the point of no return! Soon.

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(Based loosely on Epic Rap Battles of History.)

Famous people of earth get into roast battles with My Little Pony cast.

These are short, as they are mostly dialog, so short shorts if you will.

Made with Eternal Aviator , thecakeisabiglie, and of course me.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

6717479 Fuck off, Florida. I MEAN LOVE ME!

I... I don't get it. The lines are phrased in such a way that it seems like it's trying to have a rhythm or tempo, but then there's no rhymes or even rhyme meter. The few times there are rhymes, it's with words randomly placed in the sentence, instead of standard end- or mid- rhymes. Plus, neither of them even attempts to prove their claims. They both just say "I'm right and I have proof of it and you must be wrong" without actually offering any proof. (Plus, personally, I would have used Tyson for this argument instead of Nye, but Nye does have more star power). I'll see what the next chapter looks like before passing too much judgement though.

I like the theory and the execution although I do agree with TheDriderPony:

The lines are phrased in such a way that it seems like it's trying to have a rhythm or tempo, but then there's no rhymes or even rhyme meter.

I do have to also point out that the line

but I bet the gravity of your ego alone could make them go on there own!

Its their not "there"
I've not read the second chapter but I hope it isn't as written quick as this one is. I don't think you have any history in music and/or rap and I genuinely like the idea but it could have been done better

B-Bill Nye da science guy!

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