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durtydan


I'm a guy who only likes MLP fan fiction. Tried watching the show, couldn't get through three episodes.

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minor spelling errors or missing a word but very good. I like how he knows how strange it is to act like he does around the other characters.

I quite enjoyed that! Can't wait to read more! :twilightsmile:

Twilight doing some naughty things to him?:3

No better way to wake up. And I liked the dialogue between Cadance and Alex.

.......what the fuck is going on in this story? Were you high when you wrote this?:rainbowhuh:

Celestia bout to get lit the fuk up lol:rainbowlaugh::trollestia:

Vote for Rainbowdash for first Snu Snu cause she's adorable when flustered
#sonicwingboner

You know, I almost want to vote for Cadence considering she is the only one that hasn't fallen for him yet. Or maybe Luna. Because, why not.

Alexander? I thought his name was Gary? :trollestia:

This is getting good ...
Dat harem tho ...

The only one I can think of is Cadance. Maybe Luna considering she has probably seen some 'shit' in the dreamworld. But I don't think that anyone of them wants to start of their sexual lives with anal.

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This is cool, nice touch with pinkie by the way :3

I love it so far can't wait to see what's next 'I hope hew makes a herd.

T hat was a awesome and sweet/ funny read can't wait to see what's next .I still hope he makes a herd.:raritywink::raritywink:

This was a awesome and sweet read I'm happy him and Cadance.I bet she smoked it all :rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh:

That was a funny and sweet read . Him and Candence are awesome friends and he had a sweet moment with both Rainbow Dash and AJ .And The CMC .I still want him to have herd And I vote Celestia and Luna.

OMG he almost want San's

he almost got dunked on,Or Garnet

on him he is a beast. And This chapter had some god sweet parts ,I loved the Pinkie and Futtershy parts , I loved the Celestia singing to Alex the best .

That was so cute and awesome read.He is going to be so bucked if don't get his head in the game.

AND then they all got pregnant. :rainbowlaugh::raritywink:That was a awesome beyond awesome and sweet read.I hope Luna joins his little hard to soon.

Rarity is quite the shallow cunt in this story. Reminds me of her in other 'Shit on Spike' stories. Here she says Spike is everything she is looking for but because he's "too young" they can only ever be friends and then proceeds to compare him to Alex and tell him that Alex is better then him in every way possible. In other stories Rarity tells Spike he's everything she's wants but because he's a dragon they automatically can't be together.

He really needs to let Rosewing in on the action.

“She set me up, didn’t she, Opal?” I asked the cat sitting in my naked lap. She gave an affirmative mew; at least I think it was affirmative, as she rubbed herself up against my chest. I continued to sip my tea and pet Rarity’s pussy until she called to me.

I know he meant the cat, but this sounds wrong in many ways. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

It seems that she was blasted with the 'lust' wave. She had quite the mental control if she was able to hold of on it for that long. Makes me wonder what the other 6 will do(and Trish).

Poor Shining Armor. He's always turned into a jealous idiot for the Overpowered Human OC to beat up in these stories. What's up with that, anyway? Hopefully, trying to kill someone will come back to haunt him and not just be brushed under the rug for pony sexy times.

That's it? He was intent on killing Shining Armor and it's all just put on Shining? Wow.

Choice of music ... very classy :pinkiehappy: I approve

That was a awesome read and th parts with Alex and Tia where cute,It looks like it's Lunas turn to get her world rocked and join his herd ,and he shoud make he herd a real thing so no one else gets jealous when he is with one of the girls.Trish was a bitch after shefound out he liked mares I mean sure they are ponys but there sentient they have real thoughts and feelings just like us and I'mhappy he understands this.It was awesome haw he help his first subject.and the music and the party was awesomealmostas awesome as him becoming ailcorn / prince .An d if this is how Luna is doing I can't wait to see how the main six are doing after him and Luna go a couple rounds.

6753120 how many drugs was he doing when he wrote this? ALL THE DRUGS!

That was a sweet and awesome read please let her turn into a good mare.I become there friend.

so I thinking Alex have plane in the future?

He is so fucked.

Burning alive fucked.

I have no advise but, just keep doing what you're doing, loving this story:rainbowkiss:

I like this story,great chapter ;)

Started off reading this like hmmm interesting :twilightsmile:...... Finished it liike WTF AM I READING AND WHY IS IT SO GOOD :pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

She just dislikes it because they resemble the ponies from earth itself. Acting immature because he has found joy on a world that isn't their own.

that is sooooooo cutie, but I hope his friend understand of this plane soon but now I hope what lye he may have?

Thar was a awesome But I hope at least one of the Main six gets pregers.

Really interesting chapter...lotta stuff happened...loved it:heart:

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