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Clop is proof that God wants us to be happy.

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Reykan #1 · Dec 9th, 2015 · · 1 ·

flagrant disregard for the Hippocratic Oath

I saw no actual damage being done to the patient. Lies.

Sweet Faustian Devilry! That Was HOT! :twilightsmile: Twilight would be satisfied with this offering but Fluttershy demands MOAR!!!! :flutterrage:

Shocks #3 · Dec 9th, 2015 · · 1 ·

flagrant disregard for the Hippocratic Oath.

Hawt.

I like how this story turned out in the end. I'm glad that I was allowed the honor of editing this.

Very nice story. Proofreading was a lot of fun!

6713838 This is taken from the old version of the oath(line 7), while the new version doesn't say anything about amorous desires. The author may be using the old version of the oath.

Whatsoever house I may enter, my visit shall be for the convenience and advantage of the patient; and I will willingly refrain from doing any injury or wrong from falsehood, and (in an especial manner) from acts of an amorous nature, whatever may be the rank of those who it may be my duty to cure, whether mistress or servant, bond or free.

The author may be using the old version of the oath

Hippocratic oath should totally be called that because there is a race of hippos that taught equestria medicine.

6715373 Ah, so the oath actually specifically mentions this kind of thing? damn, didn't realize that. Learn something new every day, even from smut :rainbowlaugh:

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The motto for every one of my fics:
"Come for the clop, stay for the education!"

Pretty fun little fic. My only complaint is that you can't seem to decide if they'Re anthro, human, or pony. Gilda especially, one moment she's grumbling about her beak, and the next Redheart's kissing her lips. :derpyderp2:

Other than that, fun!

It's a shame that Red heart doesn't get used in more fics, especially clop fics. Would have thought some more people have a nurse fetish.

Jee I don't know what to make of this. It's written well but Its really horrific. Gilda's getting molested for being a jerk. Surely there are ways of correcting Gilda without being a terrible nurse? It really makes me want to see Gilda rip red heart to bloody chunks for being so terrible at basic patient rights. You can't just go use molestation as a punishment, is she trying to lose her job, get the hospital sued and go to jail?

I think its my friends nursing influence but damn this story really felt off to read.

I really love seeing an ornery Gilda get put in her place by somebody else. I really wish there was more of this stuff.

So is no one gonna mention that the next nurse who goes in there is gonna die from the smell?

Hmmm....I would have preferred it if you didn't let Gilda cum at all. Put a chastity device on her and just let her libido slowly wane over the course of the night. That she only get's to cum if she shows improved behavior the next day. After all you said that you wouldn't let Gilda cum and then you did it anyway.

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