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During an attack on the Princess of the Sun, in a moment of pure desperation, Captain Vigilant Shield received a portion of Celestia's strength. The attack was repelled, the enemies driven back, and the Princess was protected.

But no pony was meant to hold that much power.

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Very nicely done story

So.........No one rushed to the hospital or got maybe a bucket of water to take out the fire or am I reading this the wrong way?

From what I understand, both Celestia and the guard knew that he was going to die. A sad tale for sure, though I do feel like it was quite an oversight by Celestia herself. :trixieshiftright:

It was a nice read otherwise. Felt like the pacing was a bit rushed and it could have a been a little bit longer; but from what I am used to, it is a nice change of pace.

7/10
Quality work, you get a like from me. I am anticipating more from you in the future. :unsuresweetie:

Where are all the readers this should have? Far as I'm concerned, some seriously underrated work here. Well done, that was very well-written with few to no errors. You should write more, you look like a fairly talented one :ajsmug:

6739274 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
As for more, you might want to check out the Genetic Research series. It starts here. The first one is the first I posted, so they get more polished as they go.

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