• Member Since 20th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Oct 20th, 2019


Hi. I'm more of an artist then a writer. But I can be good at shooting ideas for stories.


Angel Shine was a poor little filly, who has had problems with herself her whole life. Being teased for wearing rags. For not having any expensive items like other fillies. For not having her cutiemark...For not having a single friend to standby.

Her whole life changes, however, once she meets a well-known pink party pony, who turns her life upside down. Though it seems that Angel has also changed that filly's life as well...

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 24 )

I think what you are doing with this is great, so keep up the good work. You get a follow, a like, and best of all, a spikestache. :moustache:

This is real good can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::yay:

Yay! Though you're an artist this is really good!

After reading this, I'm pretty sure it's going to have a sad pinkie in it. And I love how you made pinkie actually struggle trying to reprimand people. So in character. Try reading my story if you want to, and I'll add a link to yours if you wish. (My story is Dancing Flames, Cooling Ember)

I love it when artists write stories because we have such great imaginations! I'm an artist but I write stories as well, but my scooter is my main priority... Anyways this is a great story so far.:pinkiehappy:

It's good, really good. When I was reading this I thought that this was at ponyvill but now, I see you did this to be in the past which is fine for me and cant wait to see what happens next.


I like Spike mustaches :D Lol, thanks.


It's past Ponyville. A while after the events of 'The Cutie Chronicals'. Pinkie has earned her cutiemark here.

Thank you :twilightsmile:


Yes, it will have a sad Pinkie :pinkiesad2:

But it should be good. Sometimes sad can be a nice thing to read. It's not going to be all depressing and emotional. It should be a simple sort of sadness.

And yes, I would love a little advertisment with this story. In my head, it looks great. I'm sure other people will like it as well.

Awesome first chapter! Tracked. (: :heart:

Thou wishes for MOAR, thou shalt receive it! :rainbowdetermined2:

Once I get working on it :derpytongue2:

Sorry about the long time guys D:

I was...lazy. I'm not going to lie to you.

it was good sorry but you get a :pinkiegasp:

a :flutterrage: means 1
a :ajbemused: means 2
a :rainbowderp: means 3
a :pinkiegasp: means 4
a :twilightsmile: means 5
and a :raritywink: means 6

Seems promising... I figure Angel Shine is doomed, and Pinkie will over-learn the lesson about not leaving things alone when somepony seems to be hurting.

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