My OC is Prince Ecosis, a troubled human reincarnated as Equestria's first-ever male Alicorn, and after 200 years of being evil, lives happily as Princess Celestia's son and nature-controller.
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Awesome work
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Thanks
The language of this was a bit childish at times. No major errors, but the word choices point towards a young author.
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I see that as knowing their (primary) audience. The primary audience for clopfics however, I would guess as older teens and young adults.
Not bad, Glitter. Pretty good little one-shot. Had some actual story, character interaction and development deeper than just "they had sex."
Will there be a future chapter where Rarity returns the favor to Spike for letting her pee on him, by letting him pee on her? Just curious...
Any chance of having a chapter like this involving poop?
I really hope there will be even if I have to commission it :D
Just as good as it was when you asked me to proofread it!
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Glad you like it!
Their sex life is only just beginning.
I'm not sure how to feel about this one. Not so of the fetish but about the story itself. Still I say this is a 6.5/10 on my book (the effort put in it is clear). Have a like and a fave.
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Thanks!
6843029 Well, if they did, then they'd have to bump up the rating A LOT!
You did very well in taking canon elements from the series to build this story. I had almost forgotten about the Diamond Dogs up until reading this. The build-up to the moment where Rarity and Spike had their special time together was nicely done, too. Once more I applaud you on keeping the story focused on the characters and tale itself over the fetish elements. It made this an insightful, "What if...?" read.
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Then you read the right story.
not usely a fan of watersports but this was pretty good
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I’m pretty sure at this point, she’s more than just a crush. Lol
Wow... congratulations spike! You leveled up!
Well done. This deserves a sequel.