People need to indulge in their own insanity sometimes. I have to do it 24/7. I like pastel ponies prancing playfully. I'm the nonofficial Pun Master. I'm a certified Narwhal Enthusiast. Enjoy. ^^
Warning don't read Twilight's friends visit and are shocked when Twilight seems to act just like the pony they first met. As they try to get to the bottom of things, will Twilight be able to hold on? And what caused this anyway? One odd encounter.
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That paragraph reads like a quick bullef point list of why some real life fans say they hate alicorn Twilight, and feels too much like a author rant, regardless if it is or not.
I'll have to pass on this fic.
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6706791 Thank you for reading, and yeah, I know what you mean. I'll try to write a sequel at some point and explain a few things better. Some were vague, and I want to perfect that at some point.
6706668 That's fine. I personally like alicorn Twilight, and think she opens up many ideas for the show, however, my friend started saying all these things and asked what would happen if Twilight actually heard these opinions. So I tried it.
Well …this fanfiction could have gone better …
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I pray that I don't rush next time. My heart wasn't in it either …hope for better things to come in the future … 
I think this story is good
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Trust me, I know. I'm trying to handle pacing better in my other stories, which I personally think are much better than this.
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Thank you!