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IamI


Middle aged trans women who got into the show through her kids.


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While Midnight Sparkle was tearing holes in reality; Queen Chrysalis escapes into the human world and discovers the cult of Morgorith and The Black Gods of Death. Inspired, she seeks to unleash them and bring about the end of all things. It's up to Sunset Shimmer, Twilight Sparkle, and the rest to stop her. But even as they try, enemies from the past resurface. Claiming they seek redemption, some question their motives. In the end, will the girls triumph, just survive, or fall to the forces of darkness?

Chapters (107)
Comments ( 21 )

What is "Prolog"?

6700785 Prolog is kind of like a set up to a story.

6700820 It's written prologue. That's what I was talking about.

6700822 spell check never got it.

What a hell of a start.

*laughs maniacally as he wraps author in a hug and strokes their hair* My precious friend, you have made my day!

Salazar...
Muggle...

I see the point! ( salszar might be a coincidence but muggle is seriously Harry Potter)

Well done, though..
. this story is very good with my headcanon imagination ( they all hav powers and...AJ got it pretty late):pinkiehappy:

Oohh... i can't wait! I love Applejack!
Not really excited for Aria..( i never liked Aria and Adagio)
But... I'm reeeeaaalllyyy looking forward to Applejack! :pinkiehappy:

7239603 This going to be a long section of the story. As I examine all the girls and their relationships with each other and their evolution. Some might not like it and want me to get back to the magic stuff faster; but I feel once you've become invested in these characters as people, then once the good vs evil stuff starts happening again, it'll pack a bigger punch. I got probably a year left on this yet. Hopefully I don't disappoint you.

Awesome!

I love this better than your original "fist fight" story.. i don't know what others say, but i for one never liked the way how people make Aj fist fight with Aria in most fanfics....

For me, the AJ i love is the level-headed, dependable and sweet one.

I know she can be involved in a fight, but it's just not entertaining to read my fav pony doing that...

Awesome!

I love this better than your original "fist fight" story.. i don't know what others say, but i for one never liked the way how people make Aj fist fight with Aria in most fanfics....

For me, the AJ i love is the level-headed, dependable and sweet one.

I know she can be involved in a fight, but it's just not entertaining to read my fav pony doing that...

Leer este cap. fue como ver como ahorcaban la historia, tan terrible que ni ganas de seguirla leyendo. Ojalá la editen y la corrijan urgentemente.

7281852 Si vas a insultar a mi trabajo, tener la decencia de hacerlo en Inglés. Obviamente, usted sabe que con lo aprendido en mi historia y es sólo en Inglés.

Ni leyendo un capítulo cada cierto tiempo la historia mejora.

Yeah and Chrysallis got all of them exactly at the same time and nothing went wrong:rainbowhuh:
Thats exactly how cartoon villains work in my opinion.

Not exactly at the same time. If you read the other chapters, Aria approached Val first, in the morning. The others would have been kidnapped between the time school ended on Monday and began on Tuesday. I didn't feel I had to spell everything out. I mean this chapter is over 3,000 words already. To include all that would have made it at 12,000. Also the deaths of the Lunas happened at different times. The video had been edited together from three separate events. Plus multiple people have been kidnapped before without problems. And Chrysalis has her cult to back her up and is extremely intelligent. You may not like what happened but it's entirely logical and seperates her from being your standard cartoon /comic book baddie.

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