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TheCrimsonDM


Artists sometimes spew creation like a fountain of colorful vomit. Other times we must work, and toil, and practice until our fingers paint our keyboard and our story red with our efforts.

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The Great and Powerful Trixie must make a quick stop in the middle of nowhere at Maud's request. Things get a bit out of hoof when Maud returns hurt.

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Soooooo adorable :twilightsmile: but :twilightblush: Trixie needs to calm herself down

Finally another Maud/Trixie story!

I gotta be honest. I don't see the two of them as being compatible. :applejackunsure: Maud Pie is so sedate, and Trixie is a flamboyant show off.

Slight fix, 'breath' is a noun. 'Breathe' is a verb, Maud should be asking Trixie to breathe.

Four linebreaks above "The End" you used you're instead of your.

This was a nice lil short story, I give this ship a rating of rock solid ^^

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I can picture this happening:
Maud: We need to go grocery shopping.
Trixie: *gives a long winded, exaggerated excuse for why she's too busy*
Maud: Make sure to get some milk on your way back.
Trixie: ... *grumbles* Fine.

Another rock solid performance by The greatest ship in all of Fimfiction.

Well done friend. You get a 9/10! 9 because I wanted more than one chapter. :twilightsheepish:

6700604 I never knew that myself. I learned something new today. It's amazing what we think we know versus what's actually true in grammar and English. :rainbowhuh:

You're really making me love this ship :twilightsmile:

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