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TheCrimsonDM


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The Great and Powerful Trixie must make a quick stop in the middle of nowhere at Maud's request. Things get a bit out of hoof when Maud returns hurt.

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Well that's just cute.

Soooooo adorable :twilightsmile: but :twilightblush: Trixie needs to calm herself down

Finally another Maud/Trixie story!

I gotta be honest. I don't see the two of them as being compatible. :applejackunsure: Maud Pie is so sedate, and Trixie is a flamboyant show off.

Slight fix, 'breath' is a noun. 'Breathe' is a verb, Maud should be asking Trixie to breathe.

Four linebreaks above "The End" you used you're instead of your.

This was a nice lil short story, I give this ship a rating of rock solid ^^

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I can picture this happening:
Maud: We need to go grocery shopping.
Trixie: *gives a long winded, exaggerated excuse for why she's too busy*
Maud: Make sure to get some milk on your way back.
Trixie: ... *grumbles* Fine.

Another rock solid performance by The greatest ship in all of Fimfiction.

Well done friend. You get a 9/10! 9 because I wanted more than one chapter. :twilightsheepish:

6700604 I never knew that myself. I learned something new today. It's amazing what we think we know versus what's actually true in grammar and English. :rainbowhuh:

You're really making me love this ship :twilightsmile:

Cuddling with Maud is the best present ever!

Aww it's really nice to see Trixie is doing something nice for maud and she was really overprotective of her because of her reputation but maud wants to reassure that everything's going to be okay this was a pretty sweet story keep up the good work

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