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BleedingRaindrops


Just a critic who happens to write about pastel colored magical talking ponies

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When Pinkie Pie seems troubled by her inability to pulverize boulders into dust, Applejack suggests a visit to the Pie Family farm to learn from the best. She tags along, of course. After all, she's always wanted to learn.

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Comments ( 18 )

Good to find a story where pony hooves are actually depicted at being hard, and not the soft things people tend to depict them as. Not a bad idea for a story, either.

I saw this yesterday, posted from a different user. What's going on?

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Gold Ink stole it from me when I dropped a link to the Gdoc into an editing group. I called the fuzz and they had it removed.

6693415
I had wondered if it was something like that. In any case, the comment I left there was along the lines of how Mac apparently learned the Pie family Futae no Kiwami technique during the Apples' visit.

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I saw that. Ended up looking up the video, and considered calling this Applejack Learns Futae no Kiwami after reading that comment.

That story was brilliant. It had an unusual topic or theme in this case. Smashing rocks, which then became a generalizing topic about one's identity. This was brilliant. What is also interesting that Maud and Limestone have this weird conversation at the end: Could it be that Pinkie Pie is adopted?

Ri2

6693815 But Pinkie can't be adopted, Marble's her twin!…right?

A fun story, through if limestone and Maud were talking about what I think they were I'm curious as to the story behind that.

6694194
There may or may not be something on the horizon about that. :scootangel:

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6694171
She never said "twin". She said "baby sister" and "a few minutes younger" they could still easily have different mothers.
But I have no idea what you're talking about
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6694662 ROCK SMASH ROCK SMASH
WHAT A LOAD OF BOULDER DASH
I'M GONNA EAT SOME POTATO MASH
BUT NOT BEFORE LEARNING ROCK SMASH!

rrrrrrRRRRRRRRRRROCK S M A S H ! ! ! ! !

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Probably better that you didn't, so you wouldn't get any reflexive downvotes from people who think it's a crossover. But I appreciate the thought.

Other stray thought: Royal Guards are almost always unicorns or pegasi. But what if the plainclothes bodyguards are mostly Earth ponies? Equestria seems generally peaceful, but if some idiot in the crowd decides to take a crossbow shot at a Diarch, we'll suddenly see the small, innocent-looking farmgirl standing next to him shatter the assassin's bones with a single punch...

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Don't underestimate the earth ponies

I dare say, this story is simply smashing! :raritywink:

Very cute and sweet. Bravo.

Just use HM06, it's easier.

That chapter title makes me think:

Well, it seems so real
I can see it
And it seems so real
I can feel it
And it seems so real
I can taste it
And it seems so real
I can hear it
So why can't I smash it?
So why can't I smash it?

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