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TheOneAJ


I'm am an autistic brony, looking to write fantasy and everyday life novels for my kind. I became a brony when I related well with applejack and twlight, and I love the show.

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It has been a week since starlight's reformation. Since then, she has been unable to find happiness. But then, on a trip to Canterlot with Twilight, her childhood friend Starburst invites her out to diner. However, with her past and feelings of abandonment come back to haunt her, will she be able to forgive him, and find something more?

pre-reading done by Henkipie
art doen by DM

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Comments ( 23 )
Eddy13 #1 · Dec 2nd, 2015 · · 1 ·

Man, I'm liking this new ship. I find childhood friends make good soulmates, one of the reasons I'm into FlutterDash.

Also, nice nod to another of my favorite pairings but isn't very popular.

6688846 lol, it reminds me how my family always shipped my childhood friend and I.

Just a friendly hint; you might scare some of the sticklers away with two spelling errors in the description, before clicking on the story itself.

6689182 care to point them out?

Starburst forever!

6688897 I had a "boyfriend" in kindergarten once and we were actually quite adorable. (Every morning we'd run to each other and hug) later in third grade they had to transfer some kids to other classes, and it was the first time we were in the same class since then. His mom joked about it say "oh! Now to much easier for us to plan the wedding!" :trollestia::rainbowlaugh:

Love it have you thought of makeing a sequel were celestia trys to get twilight on a date?

Nice little one-shot, but did you really feel the need to mention flash.

Haven't watched friendship games so I don't know if anything changed with his character

6701598 I never said it was flash ;p
Besides, Twilght didn't seem too pleased at the idea

6701789 Well who other guard could it be and In my defence I took twilights reaction as flustered

6708156 Celly is referring to Flash Sentry, of course.

6734143 Of course. Cadance is rubbing off on her.

6734143 If you look at my original comment you can see that I did mention Flash

:heart:heart::heart::heart::raritystarry::pinkiehappy:OOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD!!!!! I have been wanting this FIC to happen when season 5 ended!!!! Yes the fic was short and it could of had some more details about the castle and the restaurant. but the conflict that happen with Sunburst and Starlight really made this fic shine. give more detail to what had happened to them after Sunburst got his cutie mark and starlights reaction to it was great. 7/10 :heart::pinkiehappy:

I think I can never understand why the people always like to think the first pony a certain character has ever seen, and was even only a tiny bit friendly towards said pony, that they have to be in love. Well don´t let me stop you, I don´t want to be mean, but sometimes I just need to say/ask something. It is the same with some games, where the main char has to be in love with a caracter that I can only hate, and the second, or thirt actually cool girl isn´t an option as always.

Well to be honest I like this more, than some other shippings, from the idea itself.

6771851 thabks, I actually just rea a AU ic where starlight fallowe sunburst and he abused her..
Though ten again, I made anothe Fic call 'Buttons date with Silver Spoon' you might like

6772065 I have deleeted my first comment accidently before I finished writing it, so I make it short.
I try the Button story you mentioned, but I would also like to know the name from the other story you mentioned, I wanted to try something more darker again.

6772151 can't remember, though, I think it started out as a...
Ah yes, it was a comedy on this question: 'why didn't starlight go back to diffrent parts of time or do X instead. One part was if she made herself go to Canterlot with starburst, he was a dick, and future twilight and star beat him up...
I admit, I'd love to see a more serious story, but let me know what you think of my other one ^^'

She was brought to a halt as his magic forced her to look right at him.

nothing that serious, but I would probably be against someone using magic on me, to force me to listen in any way. Actually I saw some storys, where a Human was forced by a Unicorn, got transformed against his will, and stuff like that. The moment he was complaining, the whole world made him the asshole of the story.

However I somehow forgot what I wanted to say, but I don´t take it that serious all the time, but even if it is something bad in a way, some storys still need it for certain reasons, and I need it. It probably adds a certain conflict to the story.

She smiled. “I had a foalhood crush on you two. I guess I—”

sometimes I somehow prefer it, if only on of them had a serious crush, and the other one somehow started to slowly fall in love wit the other one.

She sighed dreamily. “So happy to see two ponies meant to be together.” She eyed to Twilight. “You know, that one guard—”



Twilight’s eyes widened. “Did I mention how honored I was to help with the new security spells! Oh, I think there were some bugs in it, I got to go fix them, bye!” and with that she ran off.



Celestia shook her head. “One day my faithful student.”

At first I had nothing against Flash, but after some talking with other people, I somehow noticed the lack of personality from him, and Equestria girls has some of my not so favourite elements a story can have, but I somehow like both of the first movies, just not how the quick romance that was introduced into the story.

I somehow started to read this story anyway, and even if I dislike such sort storys, it wasn´t bad. It could be because I have a little Starlight hype, and she is, or now was one of my favourite "Villains..was a Villain I meant", and I was actually looking for some romance storys, or Slice of Life from her, just not the short once.

Like I said, I still enjoyed it, it could have been much worse.

This was cutely adorable. I can't wait for more fanfiction on this ship. Ever since the premier it's been slowly rising to almost meet the favoritism of some my top favorites ship. The only thing stopping it, well the fact there very little stories of this ship. We need more. If we get more then this ship might rise to my top five ships.

But anyway, good story. I really enjoyed. The funny thing is, this is the first story of the ship I've read. Yet I'm already putting it on the Multiread bookshelf. Only the best of the best get this bookshelf.

You need to add a sequel or something else to this!! IT'S MEANT TO BE!! <3

Cool, and...hey-AJPony from YouTube!

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