10975941101674 Thanks y'all. I'm glad you guys like it. Also, I just realized that when I imported it from gdocs it didn't keep the strikethroughs that were actually important to the story. Fixed now. Check it out again if you want.
You know... When I srtat reading this story my first though was something like "Eww, what a blunt and cliche beginning!". And, you know what? My opinion on beginning is the same, BUT! Everything after killing whole outpost of Fire Hairs and cave full of timberwolves? Awesome. I may disagree with you on one point or another, but I definitely LIKE this story and vote as such. It's dark, it's good and full of... how should I say it... uncertainities? Yeah.
1492688 Thanks for your feedback! And just so you know, yes, I despise the beginning also. If I ever get the chance (which will probably take a while) I plan to do a major overhaul of the first few chapters. Unfortunately, I have very little time to write these days, but chapter nine is in the works and I think that it will turn out pretty well. Chapter 2 of my other fic, "Margarine" is currently being written as well, if your interested in that.
You don't even get the idea of how not-so-much I have time myself...-_- Work, DM'ing and lack of sleep take its toll, so I more than understand you) 1457 words is not so much, but I will wait)
good chapter and sweet Brute is a male alicorn looking towards the next
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Thanks y'all. I'm glad you guys like it. Also, I just realized that when I imported it from gdocs it didn't keep the strikethroughs that were actually important to the story. Fixed now. Check it out again if you want.
besides what we spoke about,
My name is Primepersephony and this is my favorite fic on the citadel
You know... When I srtat reading this story my first though was something like "Eww, what a blunt and cliche beginning!". And, you know what? My opinion on beginning is the same, BUT! Everything after killing whole outpost of Fire Hairs and cave full of timberwolves? Awesome. I may disagree with you on one point or another, but I definitely LIKE this story and vote as such. It's dark, it's good and full of... how should I say it... uncertainities? Yeah.
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Thanks for your feedback! And just so you know, yes, I despise the beginning also. If I ever get the chance (which will probably take a while) I plan to do a major overhaul of the first few chapters. Unfortunately, I have very little time to write these days, but chapter nine is in the works and I think that it will turn out pretty well.
Chapter 2 of my other fic, "Margarine" is currently being written as well, if your interested in that.
Please continue reading!
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You don't even get the idea of how not-so-much I have time myself...-_- Work, DM'ing and lack of sleep take its toll, so I more than understand you)
1457 words is not so much, but I will wait)
Oh, and please continue writing)