"With Blood and Rage of Crimson Red
Ripped from a Corpse so freshly Dead
Together with our Helish Hate
We'll Burn You All, That is Your Fate!"
Crossover with the Green Lantern DC Comics
"Twilight Sparkle of Equestria, you have great rage in your heart, welcome to the Red Lantern Corp!" Rating for moderate violence and blood
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695591what do you mean?
Im talking about the DC group
Red Light = Prostitute area
Red Lantern = Rage driven variant of Green Lanterns (Who are will driven). Belonging to DC comics.
The more you know
Ok... Umm, Red Lanterns don't make constructs. Only Blue, Green,Yellow (technically Orange) and Indigo (to an extent) can create constructs. You seem to have the basics of English story writing...ok'd... Everything went too fast. Describe the change from a mild mannered nerd to the universal symbol of rage. Describe the sick, sadistic joy Twilight felt in killing those animals.
Anyway I personally felt no indication whatsoever that Twilight had become an animal murdering psychopath. You have an interesting concept.
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696693
hey cool you are a at4w fan as well
and besides the Red Lantern rings are basically mind control devices which increase the rage of the user
and I am am planning on having instances of Twilight trying to fight back from within
Ok I like the idea...but SLOW DOWN.....everything was moving way too fast for its own good....
701097
i agree with you. the story has a good idea and needs to expand more and have the internal struggle starting already.
It's All good
It is fun to read 
Is this on GoogleDocs? If it is, then I humbly present myself as a proofreader. If you would like to accept my offer, reply to this comment or send me a PM.
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no sorry I dont knwo what google docs is
823687 If you would still like a prereader, You can E-mail me the file and I can e-mail back the fixed version.
825226
okay I think I will do that for the future versions
825272 Ok. My e-mail is anthonyyoungdale@yahoo.com. I check my e-mail everyday, so I'll get it when you send it.
696194 Actually all the lanterns can make constructs, Atrocitus learned how during Brightest Day and once he gave the rest of the red lanterns back the ability to think beyond "kill everything" he taught them how to.
696194 Yellow and orange are two different groups. Yellow is for fear and orange is for greed.
2597392 You misunderstand, I was talking about groups that create constructs. Agent Orange produces Lanterns that are the souls of those he has killed, which technically makes them constructs, but I don't really think the souls of the deceased count as constructs.
Red lanterns don't use constructs. Only Rankorr, the first human red lantern uses constructs.
2884953they did in the gl animated series
2884953
Ponies are more at tune with their emotions than most sentients.
2884986
needs more
2884986
why is this story dead