In a universe far, far away...
After a century of war between the feuding Lunar Republic and the Celestial Jedi Order, a new threat is built in space, known as the Lunar Menace. The new journey of a young Jedi begins as she, her friend, and many other companions along the way fight to destroy the Lunar Menace, and defeat the dark lord behind it, Darth Obiareus. Could the young Twilight Sparkwalker and her companions be able to defeat the Lunar Republic's new station?
Inspired by the story: Star Wars: Ponies of the Republic made by BlueSun52!
Art by Cinders of War!
Chapters (7)
Huh, well the movie does come out tomorrow.
Alright Generation you fot my attention and I can tell this is going to be good.
Definitely enjoying so far. Kinda hard not to since I am a Star Wars fan...
My inner fangirl is screaming.
Oh dear...
Oh my god... A Star Wars episode 1 with PONIES IN IT?!?!
Please just tell me they kill off EVERY PROBLEM WITH THE REAL EPISODE ONE....
I wonder, is this gonna be 60% politics like the original Episode 1?
6753413 I'm actually trying to get away from that path, and focus a little more on battles and action, so don't worry, I'll try my best! Hopefully this story is boding well with you so far.
You have my attention, also BUCKING SWEET!
Pinkie Pie + Jar Jar + force capabilities = the funniest chapter-ending yet!
Just speculating here, but I think Pie Pie Pinks is both Jar Jar AND Annakin Skywalker and will end up "going evil" aka pinkamina pink maybe?
Oh god, those two combined = Even more randomness!
Pie pie pinks is actually tolerable unlike in the phantom menace. Point fan fiction!
So now we have:
3 Jedi insead of 2
Jar Jar that breaks the 4th wall amd has the force
Annikin Skywalker without the Force
All with:
Celestia as Yoda
Kai as Qui-jon
Either Twiight or Sunset as Obi-Wan (or both)
Going great so far! Especially seeing Sunset's past
I feel you have the makings of a great story!
Interesting....
A better Jar Jar and Madagascar references. Loving this chapter. Keep up the great work!
Very interesting story so far.
I'm getting some bad vibes from Darth Obi....
Is Darth Obi simular to Darth Maul?
And Darth Moon simular to the Emperor?
Otherwise, I have a feeling that, by the end of this whole story, either Twilight or Sunset will be dead. If not, then one will be converted to the dark side.
Why do I get the feeling that Kai will end up fightning Darth Obi...
6846422 Obi is Maul, Moon is Emperor.
6847154 Then if my predictions are correct, then Kai will be killed by Darth Obi, only to be killed by Twilght and Sunset. They become Knights, and take on Pinks as an apprentice.
Pinks just needs a 'push' in the right direction..
6897650 or some forceful training...
Bad puns aside... Great chapter! Can't wait for the next part. Also, a bit of predicting, but I think Flash and Twilight will end up together, and Sunset going to the dark side (shame about there being no "Luke, I am your father" based scene, but this is what I think will happen)
Flash Amidala, huh? I see what you did there.
Haven't read this yet but I have say one thing before reading.
Please No Jar Jar!
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YES YES JAR JAR!!
Hmmm....
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OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING
I don't know if I'll be reading this soon, but I just want to point out how you seem to have forgotten about this, not unlike my Star Wars crossover of course.
i love star wars