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Ember The FireBurd


Gallus is best don't @ me.

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All OC's involved belong to their respective owners and are used with permission

Hum... mind if I ask who are these owners? And why you choose their characters in particular? :twilightsheepish:

Also while I'm at it, is there a reason why the cover image features five characters while the description only mentions four of them by name?

This was the case for Blue, Ember, Apple, Sunny, and all of their friends.

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The five OCs Include Blue (me), Apple, Sunny, Ember(main-author), and tho one not mentioned would be Scotch, mainly because of how she is not really apart of the group till later I guess. All of the OCs are actually real peoples OCs and are each one of out friend's as well. Like for example: Blue is me, Ember is Adog, and so on for people I won't name. We chose them originally because of the comedic value to us as the owners of making our OC interact in this very... Lewd way. Something I don't think any of us ever imagined would happen like this. And just let it be known, that despite the obvious sexual themes of this story, none of the people involved in this are actual cloppers... Just an interesting fact.
I hope that clears some things up, and if there is any other questions you have please go ahead and ask them.

causing her to let out numerous colorful swears pertaining to Luna’s nether regions.

Fallout Equestria reference, I hope.:twilightsheepish:

On TV tonight was their favorite show to watch, The Little Boom Hypothesis.

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the university of Pranceton...A.K. Yearling

So many references...

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All of the OCs are actually real peoples OCs and are each one of out friend's as well

Now that you mention it, I did get that self-insert vibe.

We chose them originally because of the comedic value to us as the owners of making our OC interact in this very... Lewd way.

I get it, this story it's basically a role playing story that it's been edited to be publish in the site.

and the one not mentioned would be Scotch, mainly because of how she is not really apart of the group till later I guess.

I don't really see a benefit from leaving her out in this manner, after all you are not aiming to withhold that information like if it was a spoiler and the way the story it's presented it gives me the impression that the premise is along the lines of: Despite the odds these unlikely characters will end up becoming friends no matter what. Making it more about the process and the adventure than the destination.

People would figure it out right away from the cover image anyway, and that it will take longer and perhaps be more difficult to annex Scotch into the group just goes right along with the idea the premise is setting in my opinion.

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I wouldn't say this is a roleplaying story really. We don't ever and haven't ever really role-played before apart from minor things done only as jokes. Rather this is a story we had come up with and discuss the plot regularly for upcoming parts, like any other book, that has new and unique characters, as each of ours have individual and mostly set personalities.

And yes, Adog and Myself are quite avid FoE fans, so it was indeed a reference.

In terms of why scotch was not added originally, I can not tell you. It was Adog that published it, not I. That pertains to him. I personally would have.

Shall read later, seems interesting.
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Thank you for reading :twilightsmile: As Blue said, all the OC's here are from our crazy little group. The cover art only shows those characters since one wasn't introduced yet. Scotch was introduced (as I'm sure you clearly know by now *cough cough* chapter 10 *cough*), she's the red mare on the far left. As for the description, I can add her in; not sure why I didn't in the first place honestly. My intent is to update the cover with the additional character once he's introduced in arc 2. Don't know why we decided to go that route, just seemed fun I guess.

Glad to see you caught the references. Like Blue said, very avid Fo:E fans here so I'm gonna do my best to incorporate some more references and maybe a LittlePip swear or two :pinkiehappy: Oh and "Little Boom Hypothesis" had me laughing so hard there was no way I could pass up putting it in here :rainbowlaugh:

I'm writing as Ember (my OC and avatar here) so I hope it comes across as equal effort on behalf of all the characters. I'm doing my best to not "favorite" one over the others and give each their own proper focus and development in the story. Being this is the first thing I've ever written, I'm excited to see feedback already so thank you again :twilightsmile:

Glad to have found this fic, really enjoyable to read ^_^

Well damn, poor apple is such a innocent stallion being caught like that by blue xD.

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Shush, he liked it...
There's no such thing as innocence here.
(I wrote 13 btw if you were wondering)
;)

Wow... wasn't expecting an ending like that! Ember's gonna deserve all that hate from blue.

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