Lessons in Kindness and Empathy

After having one too many run-ins with the school law, Air Castle has been suspended from the school Track and Field team for a whole two months, complete with a week-long detention.

As if that wasn't enough, they have been assigned a tutor to help him earn higher marks and better results in an unorthodox programme that serves as a cornerstone subject of Canterlot High.

Needless to say, they're not ecstatic about it, especially if the tutor in question is a type of person who keeps rubbing them the wrong way at all times.

Note: Takes place before the start of "Equestria Girls", ends when the film does.

Chapters (2)

Chapter 1: Physical punishment · 30th Nov 2015 · 4,328 words
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Chapter 1.5: Enter the tutor(s). · 11th Jan 2016 · 4,222 words
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michaelb958 #1 · Jan 29th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1.5: Enter the tutor(s). ·

“Did you learn anything in detention?”
“I've learned that irradiating food is safe because it works by only firing gamma rays and not alpha and beta particles, which is what makes the food radioactive, the lowest soil layer is the ‘R’ horizon, or bedrock, the layer from which the parent material is formed; the three types of weathering are physical, chemical and biological weathering, radioisotopes exist because excess neutrons are joined to the nucleus, thus making it energetic and unstable; and that Professor Oblong Chalkboard would rather write teacher comments in assignments in purple ink for students if the school law allowed it.
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“Who said it was during this seven-day period?”

Hee hee hee. Not bad.
(Also, punctuation nitpick: the commas just after "food radioactive" and "biological weathering" should probably be semicolons.)