Princess Celestia, Ruler of Equestria, sometimes needs a moment to herself. She creates the moment on a calm morning where the snow has fallen and the wind blows, with the accompaniment of tea.
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Princess Celestia, Ruler of Equestria, sometimes needs a moment to herself. She creates the moment on a calm morning where the snow has fallen and the wind blows, with the accompaniment of tea.
As much as I found myself surprised at the pace, I enjoyed it. Sometimes the details feel slightly rough? There's something about that shampoo line that bugs me and I can't quite figure it out.
The tone was nice, seemed like it fit the story well.
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Maybe it's because we don't understand of the magic of the Magical Shampoo . I mean this is my second story. and I've never been the best at making environments. Anyways, thank you!
The correct term here would be spat.
Also I think swished would be a more smooth word to use than swooshed, even though it's technically correct.
I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was a very nice idea and you executed it quite well.