• Published 28th Nov 2015
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Sweet Atonement - mouch30



Adagio always thought she knew what was best for her sisters, but with Aria missing and Sonata not understanding why, she must swallow her pride and turn to the one person who'd be willing to help her.

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Epilogue

Adagio took a sip of her drink. Fruity, with a slightly sour tone. She closed her eyes and fought the urge to spit it out; she wanted to be sober tonight.

The room was packed with tons of people, all ready to congratulate the Dazzlings on another fabulous concert. It was going to be their last one in Canterlot before moving on.

“Adagio, darling, I have to know who made your ensembles!” chirped a petite woman.

“My good friend Rarity did,” Adagio replied. “She’s over there, in the gold dress.”

Two more girls popped up.

“This party rocks!” Sonata said, taking another swig of her drink. “Whoever made this punch sure knows how to mix their juices!”

Aria sniggered. “Yeah, I do know a couple of things.”

“Girls, girls, girls!” The voice belonged to their manager, Eagle Eye. “Wonderful show, just wonderful! The Crystal District is going to love you next week!”

“Thanks, Eagle.” Adagio gave him a side hug. “What would we do without you?”

Eagle blushed and chuckled. “Sing in the same old bars and clubs, probably. Stick with me, girls. I’m going to turn you into legends!”

He danced away, pulling on Aria and Sonata. “Come! Come! You have to mingle!”

Adagio giggled at the sight and turned away, desperate for some fresh air. Sure, she loved parties as much as the next kid, it was just a bit overwhelming all of a sudden. The venue they sang at offered to host the after party on the highest floor, giving them a gorgeous view of Canterlot. The suburbs looked so fragile from so high. It made Adagio feel so much bigger.

“Come to enjoy the view as well?”

Sunset was standing next to her, leaning against the railing of the balcony.

“Sorry, I didn’t see you there,” Adagio said. “Yeah, it was getting kinda noisy in there.”

They stood in silence.

“Sunset,” Adagio hesitantly began. “I want to talk to you. After our first concert, I began to look at our friendship is a different way. I understand completely if you want to be nothing more, but I want you to know that I would have never approached you that way.”

“Adagio…”

“Wait. I was under the influence of the Maestro, and I firmly believe you deserve an apology for my behavior. You deserve nothing but my respect and admiration for your help.”

“Seriously, Adagio…”

“Sunset, please don’t interrupt me while I’m monologuing, it’s one of the few pleasures in my life. Furthermore…”

A pair of lips stopped her from continuing. Sunset wrapped her arms around Adagio’s shoulders, pressing her mouth harder on Adagio’s.

“Mm?”

She pulled away, and smiled. “I know that wasn’t you, Adagio. And...I do want to be something more. Watching you grow into this new person...I admire you for all your hard work. I know it wasn’t easy, but you did it. And seeing you defeat the Maestro...well, it was kinda hot.”

Adagio cradled Sunset’s face in her hands. “Huh.” She leaned in and placed a gentle kiss on Sunset’s lips. “Who knew all I had to do to impress you was kill my eons old, evil mother?”

They embraced in the night air for a few more minutes.

“So...what now?” Adagio murmured.

“Well, you’re leaving tomorrow, aren’t you?”

She nodded.

“We have a few more hours before the party ends, yeah?”

She nodded.

“And this venue...has very comfortable, very private seating areas, right?”

Her lips curled into a smile. “I like the way you think.”

Sunset pulled away and softly dragged her fingers down Adagio’s face. “I’m so glad we reformed you girls,” she breathed.

“Who knew atonement could taste so sweet?”

END

Author's Note:

thank fuck this story is over lmao
stay tuned for more info about Aria :raritywink:

welp, it's here!

Comments ( 13 )

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I love me some portal :3

6998461
what will i ever do without you lmao (but sheafs is a word: a bundle of objects of one kind, especially papers.
"he waved a sheaf of papers in the air" wait i think i used it wrong tho lol)

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Thank you all for the positive feedback! I deeply appreciate you taking the time to comment :)

Omg, Adagio & Sunset, please, this is a children's show :twilightoops:

I love it :heart:
I'm a little sad finish :fluttercry:
maybe you should make a second part, with what happened with their lives.
I love every moment of this story :raritystarry:
I hope continue writing stories so in the future :pinkiehappy:
Thank you :twilightsmile:

A sequel one-shot of Sundagio.

A very good redemption story indeed :pinkiesmile:

7000603 :twilightoops:

I smell a sequel coming

This was a good story, well-written and with the Sirens pretty well in character. Well done.

7000603
have you ever read your own stories

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Thank you all so much! I'm extremely happy that you all liked it :D

7000780
I would absolutely love to write more about their relationship...perhaps I will ;)

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The next story in this 'world' isn't exactly a sequel. More like a story in the story, if that makes sense.

Are u going to make a sequel? Have the dazzlings left Canterlot for good?

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The Dazzlings will be coming back to Canterlot! They're on tour right now, and will definitely be back to visit their friends :)

I would like to make a sequel, actually. Right now, I'm working on a side story for SA, and I've got a whole bunch of other stories to write after that one, but perhaps sometime in the future.

7059079 It would be nice. Maybe add a little more detailed romance in Sundagio.

Welp now i ship flutterdusk

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