The story takes you aboard the RMS Titanic on its maiden voyage. Some say it was "unsinkable". The story revolves around the Mane 6, Third Mate John, First Mate Murdoch, Captain Smith and Octavia as they sail. But you all know how this ends.
NOTE:Murdoch and Smith will appear during the sinking.
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Walls of text....
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Still better than the real movie! Huh huh!
"Its been an honor playing with you Octavia."
"I'll never let go AppleJack."
There you go, the two most common titanic movie references before that part comes across.
11... On a story that was 1413 words long, Meanwhile 11 TIMES!!
To make better storys in the future, i suggest using variety.
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11 TIMES!!!!!!!!!!! GOD!!!
Text walls must be fixed
718312 11 of what?
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Meanwhile, he start every sixth sentence with Meanwhile. Can't stand it!
WALL OF TEXT! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
No downvote, but I'm not even going to try and read this until you fix the formatting - seriously, is it so hard to put speech on a new line?
I'm sorry that everybodys giving you some harsh reviews
but you do need to make the wall of text. BUT, you still tryed and thats a good thing
so just keep trying and space your things and then people well understand how good of a writer you are.
Did you even study English in school? Did you go to school?
I mean, sure, there have been a lot of worse fics, but this one was such a let down. I so wanted to read something about Titanic, I get here, and what's this? A let down, that's what.
I award you no points, you win nothing. Good day sir.
BEST FIC EVAR LUV IT BRU <3 XD !!!!
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10/10 would Bang.
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Better be Anal bruv
That is all.
Everybody dont say that the creator tried and thats what matters most!
Their writing was perfectly fine to me.
Great story!