A fog of unknown origins begins to appear all over of Equestria, unnoticed by Equestria's inhabitants. Over time, the fog thickens and nightmares start to occur more often, creating unease among Equestrian citizens. Princess Luna expresses her concern to her sister and they start to investigate this anomaly. Unfortunately for them, they're too late. Nightmares come to life and chaos spreads over Equestria. If the princesses and squad of five royal guards can't stop the fog on time, the world might be next...
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UPDATE: So I lost all motivation for this story and no longer want to write this. If you'd like to continue this, then be my guest. Otherwise, sorry to anyone out there who may have wanted this to be finished.
Anyways this is a crossover between MLP:FiM and Fear Equation.
This story is being written before Fear Equation has been released so this story is subject to change when it does come out.
This story takes place after the first two episodes of season 4.
First of all, I like this. Intriguing concept and plenty of potential for an unnerving mystery.
But in the name of sanity, slow down! Your pacing is pretty darn fast, and as a result we're not really being given enough opportunity to get to know our characters before you fling them into action. This is a bit of an issue when the story itself hinges so heavily on OCs that we are unfamiliar with.
Other than that, interested to see where you take this.
6662115 Thanks for the heads up! I didn't realize my pacing was a bit messed up. I'll be sure to keep that in mind when I make chapter 4.