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A few spelling mistakes here and there, but overall I like
I was expecting a ton of comments to be variations of this: 3.bp.blogspot.com/-e9B6kfYuvZw/TzX8CgOiiSI/AAAAAAAAAQU/Z25ij58pabY/s400/what_a_twist.jpg
You so should make another which shows what happens when the effects of the potions wear off and all the guys cone to their senses.
Too bad there wasn't a huge one, because I really wanted to say "What a plot twist!"
And it would be funny because it has both 'plot' and 'twist' in it.....I don't know, it would've worked out eventually.
Anyways, that was cool.
If she was pregnant, what would the baby be? Lol
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A dracconequis!
Better than I expected. Damn, Twist.
Good stuff.
Continue please...
MOAR!!!!
OH CHIT HERE WE GO!
And this is why you LISTEN TO YOUR ELDERS.
Hmm...
but if it was Snails that she wanted, wouldn't her having given herself to every stallion and colt in town with him being the last have made her feel guilty? Meh, who am I kidding, this is a clop-fic, and she IS getting what she wanted. 
Part of me enjoyed reading this. (No, I'm talking specifically mentally, here) and part of me didn't.
On one hand her 'punishment' for not following the instructions was rather fitting
You know, Twist should know better than to take the potion with orange juice, after all, it's acidic (from the citrus), and could negate the effects of the potion, the same happens with medication, which is why you shouldn't take pills with fruit juice.
There's an R34 picture of the Mr. Cake and Big Mac scene.
I... wow... storyline aside, that was INCREDIBLY hot... Twist has always been a cute little filly in my eyes, and seeing her like this was just... Wow...
Shut up and take my moustaches!
I agree with 693499 I would like to see the after effect.
I admit to 3
Not bad.
710197
Where?
753921 On the rule 34 website, as The Holy One stated.
Well, that was.... interesting.
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SO MUCH GOOD VOCABULARY!
I think this is your best fic yet. Good job!
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Meanwhile, Snails was busy getting into a hilarious predicament, probably involving being glued to something.
"He didn’t last very long, and Twist let yelped as he hot come flooded into her."
Kinda sucks that Twist doesn't get much good clop...
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agreed.
we need more escpacilly more Snails X Twist.
2190486 you should read "Sex-ed Playdate". Twist gets an awesome clop scene with Silver Spoon and then double teamed by Snips and Snails. Plus it's a good story, not just clop.
and before I read this I just want to say that cover pic is seriously adorable!
2787273 "Sex-ed Playdate" it's primary SilverSnails but Twist gets a steamy sex scene with both of them
Too much of a goo-d thing?
your paragraphs could use some breaking up. They're really long, giving the reader allot to process all at once.
OTHERWISE it was a pretty great story with a great ending!
7194080 Oh, yes i have actually read that one :D
It was rad :3
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