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The SideKick


I do stuff that might fall under your purview of "Good Writing". Perhaps you would dain my work as the opposite. Either way it's here and you may look upon it and draw your conclusions thusly.

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Years ago Fluttershy met Rainbow Dash when they were just filly's, coloring her world far earlier than most ponies. A few more years later Fluttershy met a pony she came to realize she loved, confusing her well beyond what she deserved. To add to this unpleasant surprise neither her nor Rainbow have ever spoken of their apparent connection, even after all these years. Now Fluttershy has to figure out just what "Soulmate" truly means and how it effects her long lived friendship and newly budding romance.

A story based on the same idea as Colors of the Soul by Monochromatic.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 14 )

In the folder of the Shipping group: "Fluttershy X Pinkie"

IM HERE
WHATD I MISS

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My train of thought, but don't worry about missing it, it normal derails half way through so you saved yourself a lot of pain really.

I love this universe. I love you for continuing this universe. It also ties up to when Rarity turned to Fluttershy and ask her opinion about colors in Monochromatic's fic. Looking forward to reading more of this.

Hmm... I think I'm goin' to track this n' see where u lead dear Flutters in this... interestin' fic of urs :duck:

I still think the big twist is that Rainbow Dash doesn't see in color.

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The twist is that's going to take another year for me to get a chapter out and it'll be just as lousy as this one was.

Needs an editor.

For instance.

head strong peagus.

And

Angle was beginning to get very cross with the stuttering pegasus and started thumping his foot to show his impatiens, knocking over a stuffed merpony by accident.

angle . Pegasus, should of course be capitalized. impatiens is a flower. It should alternatively be impatience. I've never heard of a merpony. Is that like a Mermaid-pony thing? :c

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Angle is the rabbit's name, why would it not be capptilized? And pegasus I don't capitalize on purpose because that's the name of the pony type, most spell check programs want to capitalize it because they think you're talking about the horse from geek mythology.

But I'll change impatience, and yes that is a mermaid pony. What else would you call

I really really like this story! How it's not getting more attention, I'll never know. Pinkie and Fluttershy are very sweet together, you write them well, and I love that we're getting a great Fluttershy story within the head-canon of 'Colors of the Soul'! I'm looking forward to reading more of this!

Seriously, great job!

ooo intresting

Heh, well, to answer ur question: it was hella good n' as sweet as I remembered it :pinkiehappy:

I don't suppose you have another chapter in the making for this do you?

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