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The Equestrian Quilava


I'm a big fan of Pokemon and MLP so most stories will be crossovers of the two. I am also a big fan of Valve, so I might make a crossover or two with the valve universe.

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Quilava a fire type pokemon who evolves from a Cyndaquil at level fourteen and evolves into a Typhlosion at level thirty-six goes into the viridian forest to solve a mystery that has baffled professor Oak. Somehow he winds up in ponyville, being a rare pokemon he disguises himself as a rodent so he is not captured by pokemon trainers. While in ponyville he discovers that there are no humans or other pokemon just ponies with special powers.

This Quilava is my OC because OC's don't have to be ponys more about this OC will be revealed in the next story.

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Comments ( 3 )

I agree, I like this story too. And I find it interesting how you using it as an allegory for how you became a brony. It kinda reminds me of a story I'm writing we a human ends up in an equestria full of pokemon, and her fire pokemon is a cyndaquil. Go figure huh?

Ok, it's not bad and I understand that this is the first story you've ever written but I do have some criticisms. Most of it's just characters spouting exposition and doesn't really lend itself to creative story telling. It was a valiant attempt but I think this story deserves a rewrite. But hey that's just me.

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