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Robipony


The man who likes ponies but also likes monsters... so what's wrong with him combining the two? ;P

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This story is a sequel to The Apple left behind Pt. 2


It has been a while since Trixie's last visit to Ponyville. Now she has returned as a part of the Broad Star Carnival. Her return has sparked Applejack's attention who is still upset over some tricks Trixie performed on her in the past.

To make matters worse somepony in a clown costume is stalking Trixie and has some disturbing plans in mind for her.
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Note: If you like the story and you want to add it to your favorites please take some time to give it a thumbs up. This not only makes the story look good, but it also makes me feel good about my work. :pinkiesmile:

Also if you are going to leave a thumbs down please explain why in the comments in below. Otherwise your just being a childish brat. :ajbemused:

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-The story was proofread/edited by: PrinceUniversa.
-Just like before this story is a continuation of the story I did for AppleBirdie (used to be called AnAppleForgotton) as an art trade.
-The story currently lacks an image because Applebirdie, hasn't had the time to make one and I am not sure I want to make one for this story yet.

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Comments ( 14 )

I really like how there are four people that were so cowardly and childish, that they decided give my story a thumbs down without giving me any feedback as to why. What a bunch of jerks. :ajbemused:

For those of you who gave me thumbs up that is nice, but you feedback would be greatly appreciated as well. :twilightsmile:

W͎h͎e͎l͎p͎, I͎ d͎o͎n͎'t͎ k͎n͎o͎w͎ w͎h͎e͎t͎h͎e͎r͎ t͎h͎e͎ f͎a͎c͎t͎ y͎o͎u͎ k͎i͎l͎l͎e͎d͎ T͎r͎i͎x͎i͎e͎ o͎r͎ t͎h͎e͎ h͎u͎g͎e͎ d͎e͎c͎l͎i͎n͎e͎ i͎n͎ M͎r͎.c͎a͎k͎e͎s͎ l͎i͎f͎e͎ w͎a͎s͎ h͎a͎r͎d͎e͎r͎ t͎o͎ r͎e͎a͎d͎. T͎a͎l͎k͎ a͎b͎o͎u͎t͎ d͎e͎p͎r͎e͎s͎s͎i͎n͎g͎. I͎ w͎a͎n͎n͎a͎ s͎e͎e͎ A͎p͎p͎l͎e͎j͎a͎c͎k͎ g͎e͎t͎ c͎a͎u͎g͎h͎t͎ t͎h͎o͎u͎g͎h͎. S͎o͎m͎e͎h͎o͎w͎ I͎ f͎e͎e͎l͎ t͎w͎i͎l͎i͎g͎h͎t͎ w͎o͎u͎l͎d͎ h͎a͎v͎e͎ a͎ b͎i͎t͎ m͎o͎r͎e͎ f͎a͎i͎t͎h͎ i͎n͎ h͎e͎r͎ f͎r͎i͎e͎n͎d͎ u͎n͎l͎e͎s͎s͎ s͎h͎e͎, s͎a͎y͎ w͎i͎t͎n͎e͎s͎s͎e͎d͎ i͎t͎ o͎r͎ f͎o͎u͎n͎d͎ c͎o͎n͎c͎l͎u͎s͎i͎v͎e͎ e͎v͎i͎d͎e͎n͎c͎e͎. I͎n͎s͎t͎e͎a͎d͎ o͎f͎ j͎u͎s͎t͎ t͎h͎e͎ f͎a͎c͎t͎ A͎p͎p͎l͎e͎j͎a͎c͎k͎ s͎a͎w͎ T͎r͎i͎x͎i͎e͎ l͎a͎s͎t͎.:ajsleepy:

7352267 The idea is that now Twilight is starting to suspect that something is wrong with Applejack. In the end either Applejack will be caught and imprisoned or killed or perhaps something even worse. I still have yet to decide. :raritywink:

After reading these three stories, it is my hope that Applejack will face justice for her murders. I also hope that she will realize that she has been targeting the wrong people and has become a monster. The one type of stories I can never stand are the ones with downer endings, especially when I as a reader empathize with the heroes and victims. I really don't want evil to win here. Having my fingers crossed.

Any way, the plot is very interesting and has me hooked.

7450900 I am glad to hear that.

I am not certain how I want Applejack's story in the series to end. I may talk to Applebirdie about it some time in the future.

Time to lock AJ up for good, in the next sequel?

7944684 So far me and Applebirdie (I think she may have changed her name again) haven't really talked about a sequel yet.

When I have the time I'll try to talk with her and see what she had in mind, if she still cares what goes on in the series.

Welp! Jig is up AppleJack

Once again, this was good. though I wasn't expecting Mr. Cake :3

8730706 Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :pinkiesmile:

I am thinking of maybe doing a part 4 and perhaps wrapping up the whole story. Or I could just have crazy AJ kill more ponies. We'll see. :rainbowlaugh:

I am going to have soo many nightmares. Still totally worth it!:pinkiecrazy:

9245061 I am glad you enjoyed it. :pinkiecrazy:

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Hopefully I should be able to write it off.

At this point she's not even trying to avenge her family, she's just become a straight-up serial killer.

I hope Twilight can win and get her some help before she goes too far, I really do.

10281057 This series was written as part of a trade a long time ago back when I did a lot more grimdark writing.

I've actually been writing other stories that I feel are much better.

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