After the events of Friendship Games....Flash decides to take a breath by not using his car and taking a walk to clear his mind and sees something.....Or better said someone
A small practice before making a story about EG i have been planing to do
If you like this story a lot i might make it a full story
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I liked it! Sounds like you're off to a good start! A few grammar things here and there, but my first attempts have those too, lol!
Look forward to more!
6648965 t-thanks i really appreciate your opinion . I know i have some grammar issues ( i dont have an editor and i dont know how the whole editor helping writer process is made ) but thanks a lot for commenting and support
Nice story but this is in need of a lot of editing. Especially regarding punctuation.
6661262 really? Maybe my laptop wrote it wrong and .. " bite Flash in the ass " ? I dont understand
6662110 oh .....
"AWESOME!!!" JOB WITH THIS STORY [EVEN IF ENGLISH IS YOUR ("SECOND")]* LANGUAGE IT TURNED OUT "GREAT!!!"
*...AND I DONT KNOW FOR SURE...
P.S. IF U DONT MIND ME ASKING IF U DOO MAKE A SEQUEL/CONTINUATION MAY I B YOUR GOTO EDITOR...
{P.S.S.IF SO, I CAN "CURRENTLY" ONLY ACCESS A COMPUTER ON ["EVERY 'OTHER' WEDNESDAY"]}**
** I USUALLY READ FANFICS ON MY XBOX360
{WITH FEW EXCEPTIONS}
7081358 I wouldn't mind to do it.
k, i'll message u my email l8r so u can send me any rough drafts